#rewriting challenge

[lilywily143]

ok. I tried to do this challenge by @swampythesweetsketch , but I have no clue how to get past these season rewrites. I hope you like what I was able to do so far though.

1. Skybound

A new genie wanting to corrupt the realm was released into the world. Wu doesn't have the time to get the entirity of the original elemental's kids, so he recruits Jay and Nya, the one's he believes are the most powerful to beat him. Kai joins in halfway though when meeting the genie and wishing for the power to protect his sibling.

It's Kai's wish that rewrites the timeline back to the original one but without Mr. Powers finding the lamp the genie was in. All three of the elemental kids remember what happens.

I think the wish Kai would make would be "I wish I just had the confidence to protect my sister instead of sticking to power!"

2. Legacy of the Green Ninja

Wu is confroted by Misako who witnessed Garmadon make a entrance back into Ninjago. Neither wanted to do it, but they take Lloyd back from Darkley's school to train. But it's revealed that Lloyd left the school and he went to look for his father.

Nya and Kai will hear about the Dark Lord's son going to join his father so they help to find the kid. They disguise as Garmadon's helpers to convince Lloyd to train under them.

Wu tries to get the Smith kids again (well, first in his perspective) , only to find out they are gone. Misako is kidnapped by Garmadon and asked to rule with him. She goes along with it to not get hurt, even if she knows that Garmadon isn't purely evil.

At one point, the Smiths and Wu and Lloyd finally meet up with Wu handing Kai the golden weapons, believing he has a chance to be the green ninja. But Lloyd steals them, having a surge of power go through him.

And the rest of the randomized order with no plot ->

3. Master of the Mountain

4. Tournament of Elements

5. Rebooted

6. Possession (w/DotD epilogue)

7. Seabound (w/ The Island prologue)

8. Secrets of Forbidden Spinjitzu

9. Sons of Garmadon

10. Rise of the Snakes

11. Crystalized

12. Pilot

13. March of the Oni

14. Hands of Time (w/ DotD prologue)

15. Prime Empire

16. Hunted

#lilywily post #lilywily143 #lego ninjago #Rewriting challenge #I just need this out of my drafts...

[zoetheduckling]

I did a Piper re-design for fun

#Been so obsessed with Fallout lately!! #started so many fanart drafts but this is one of the few I've finished so far #Thought it'd be fun to rewrite and redesign some parts of Fallout 4 and its characters to challenge my skills #fallout 4 #piper wright #fo4 #fallout #fanart #my art

[hana-loves-bumblebees]

So I’ve seen people making the argument that Percy canonicaly isn’t dumb + Sally taught him the myths, so it makes sense he’d recognize the monsters, and I’d like to put my two cents in.

Yes, Percy isn’t dumb, he’s an unreliable narrator who downplays himself because he’s not book smart like Annabeth. However, his smarts are more of the quick thinking on his feet and street-smart kind, which come out when he’s fighting and figuring out a way to defeat his foe. And yet. And yet we don’t get to see that in the show much at all, at least not Percy alone being the one to think up a strategy. And it takes away from his character.

“But Sally taught him the myths, of course he’d recognize the monsters-“ let me stop you right here. Because yes, it’s great Sally taught him, but she didn’t-couldn’t teach him how the monsters adapted to the modern world. Because that’s all the books are - myths brought into the modern world, myths adapted to the modern world, so that the demigods would have to display just as much skill needed to defeat the monsters as their ancient predecessors.

If you’re still not convinced, let me direct your attention towards this quote from The Chalice of the Gods, because there’s one more aspect a lot of people seem to disregard completely, and that is the Mist:

Even demigods need to concentrate to see whatever supernatural beings the Mist is hiding in plain sight. Even demigods can be easily fooled into thinking a monster is just a normal person.

We can also see that in the book Medusa scene, where it’s pretty heavily implied some sort of magic that affects both Percy and Annabeth is at play. They don’t immedietally connect the dots, which allows the reader to think for themselves who could this new character be and what their deal is. And the demigods are not any less smart for not immediately recognizing whatever foe stands before them, because the monsters have adapted and no longer are the complete same as they are in the myths, which is something neither the camp nor their mortal parents would be able to teach them. The camp cannot prepare them for how different the monsters and their tactics are.

I do think this could have been fairly easily portrayed in the show. You could have the show Annabeth and Percy be suddenly drowsy/sleepy when meeting Medusa, you could have Percy recognize Crusty after he’s already trapped Annabeth and Grover - he could suddenly remember Sally telling him the story, which would allow the audience to hear what the deal is here, and then have Percy manipulate + kill him.

So yeah. I hope this makes sense. Because I’m so tired of hearing “well it makes sense they recognized the monsters instantly” when no, it does not.

#rick riordan remember your canon challenge failed #also i’m obviously not trying to put down the people that like the show at all #and tbf the show’s not bad! #i just wish it had been marketed as the rewrite that it is instead of a faithful adaptation of the book #feel free to engage in polite discussion #pjo #pjo show #pjo show crit #percy jackson and the olympians #percy jackson #pjo tv show #pjo tv show crit #rick riordan #rick riordanverse

[dragonpropaganda]

you should talk about your thoughts on rw fanon (looking with huge eyes)

Oh god, there's a lot of major misconceptions have concreted into fanon, mostly around ancient society and ascension.

First things first! Ascension is not death! They are entirely separate things treated entirely separately by the text of the game. I can see where the interpretation is coming from, but it doesn't really align with how the text treats either subject. Five Pebbles may want to remove the self destruction taboo, but from his reaction to the rot it's clear that he doesn't want to die. Conflation of ascension and death only comes up as an offhand possibility that pebbs makes on iterator 4chan, when he's going into the possibilities of scenarios that even the other sliverists are doubtful of! (let me make clear that I am not a sliverist by any means)

Ascension is more of talked about as a form of transcendence, yeah? A Bell, Eighteen Amber Beads talks about their sitution as being "To have grasped at the boundless infinites of the cosmic void…", not as them seeking an end to life.

The beta dialogue goes into more detail, mentioning the "infinities of time and space" and the "boundless fractal planes of spirit and reality...", though this dialogue was cut and it's hard to tell how much it reflects the concept as in the released game.

As for the cultural misconceptions... there's A Lot to talk about, but the first that comes to mind is the common conflation of the five natural urges and the christian concept of sin.

It is true that the negation of urges is mentioned by moon as an alternative method of ascension, but much of what we know about the culture of the people who the fandom calls the ancients (which makes discussion of the depths a mess but that's something for another post entirely) points towards the urges not being seen as shameful.

Even the first urge does not seem to be particularly scorned! Being a warrior is presented as a cause for bragging in the Shaded Citadel pearl, being comparable with being an artist and a fashion legend. The second urge, also does not seem to be suppressed. Multiple sources attribute some level of honour to parenthood! The aforementioned pearl also mentions Seventeen Axes, Fifteen Spoked Wheel as being a "Mother, Father and Spouse" without any hint of shamefulness. Nineteen Spades, Endless Reflections expresses pride about having progeny, mentioning it alongside their owned land and esteem among their peers.

After some peer review, an esteemed friend has told me to add a section on purposed organisms as well! This is not so much my area, so I might be a bit off on some things.

As moon says, the majority of purposed organisms were tubes in boxes, and that the primal fauna of the world are almost entirely extinct. A lot of the fandom seems to ignore the first part, and i can't say I blame them, but the evolution of the creatures is so much weirder than people think.

Concept art for the creatures has this interesting quality to it, where the organic parts of the creatures have an almost... melty quality to them.

In the concept art, the flesh appears as if it's almost defying the machinery to form an animal shape. It's as if it's conquering its own artificiality the way the foliage grows over the (stone, brick and concrete, not mostly metal as some think!) ruins.

Of course, it's hard to really tell how much of this reflects the finalised concept, most of the integration is much smoother in the game, in line with a seamless kind of biomechanical design. There was always an intention of biomechanical strangeness, as shown in this screenshot of the devlog before the term "slugcat" even existed!

That said, the melty nature of the concept art shows a level of wild change inherent the biomechanical nature of the creatures, as if they truly are the result of these "tubes in boxes" almost revolting against their own boxes.

and considering centipedes... some tubes may not have had boxes in the first place!

#rain world #rain world lore #rainworld #rw spoilers #please note! my role in downpour development does not make me an authority on what is canon or not! #my domain is entirely within challenge mode and arena which aren't canon anyway #my lore analysis is just lore analysis with no looks behind the scenes of anything vanilla #downpour was made as a fan expansion and the rewrites were just done directly by james #we didn't get any disambiguation on the lore (and thank fuck for that honestly. analysis is the best part) #though the hills ARE made of bricks #this is canon not because i say so but because it is visibly true in some areas of the game. part of the text and thus canon. weep. #i could go into more detail on most of this! purposed organisms aren't my area of expertise tho so i might be a bit shaky on some of that #anyway if anyone has any fact checking to do. please do so #media analysis is a dialogue!

[connabeth]

i knew making percy and annabeth have brief heart to hearts while grover was asleep in episode 3 was going to backfire miserably because it completely ruins the magic of the zoo truck scene…this is jumping the gun, but you’re telling me, ten years down the line when they make the mark of athena adaptation, it won’t include the infamous STABLES scene??what even is the point then. perhaps it’ll be somewhere else on the ship but that defeats the entire purpose of nostalgia and looking back and reminiscing about where they came from…rip my queue tag “i’ll be fighting next to queue”

#pjo #percy jackson #percabeth #percy jackson and the olympians #pjo tv show #LMAO i’m just complaining just to complain atp but THERES JUST TOO MUCH CHANGE #RICKALD RIORDAN STOP MARKETING THIS AS AN ADAPTATION WHEN ITS VERY CLEARLY A REWRITE CHALLENGE

[ganondoodle]

recent panel i liked for chapter 2s rough draft (page 22), one of the more chaotic sketches

(comic wip)

#ganondoodles #zelda #art #tloz #loz #demise #wip #context for this dialog is basically #demise challenging hylia on her constant threats of killing him to actually do it instead of just saying it bc it wont work as a threat #and he prompts her to stab him through the heart right this second if she can #and she says that demons dont have a heart to stab through #hence this dialog #idk if im being clever but i liked this part #although its been hard to keep working on stuff i have been doing rewriting and rough draft work #so ...little to post #this chapter has a one of my fav moments tho #wanted to post something before the strike starts #although im not sure if not posting stuff is part of it again

[honeyhoneypot]

“I thought ‘fraternising with the enemy’ was one of your key strategies.” He hummed, and watched as Alejandro's previously distracted gaze snapped to meet his eyes.

Ah, gottem.

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I SEE LONDON REWRITE OMG... i mentioned this oneshot (twoshot now lmao) a little while ago and decided that it was FINALLY time to post it, so YIPPEE

can be considered as an entry for day 7: free day, of alenoah week!!

#i wish there were more rewrites of specific challenges omg they're so fun #i LOVE this one please go read i love you #alenoah #alenoahweek2024 #noah td #td alejandro #i see london... #the episode lmao

[simlit]

Chosen of the Sun | | dawn // thirty-eight

| @amuhav

POLL RESULTS | Tayuin wins the Retreat poll and becomes Kyrie's chosen date.

next / previous / beginning

KYRIE: Tay! Imagine my surprise to find you in your room. TAYUIN: Huh? KYRIE: Uh, anyways, are you busy? TAYUIN: I wasn’t. KYRIE: Great! So you can… come with me? TAYUIN: Come with you… where? KYRIE: Right, that’s… Do you mind? ELION: No, no, I’ll be over here, admiring the cracks in the walls. KYRIE: Thanks. KYRIE: Ah, anyways. I know it’s sudden, and it’s a bit early for dinner… I mean, not that I’m here for dinner. I mean, I’m not here to ask you to dinner. TAYUIN: Are you feeling okay? KYRIE: Ah, yeah. I’m sorry. I wanted to ask you to come out with me. Just… to get some air. I know of this place, it’s nice and there shouldn’t be anyone around. I know that… bothers you… TAYUIN: You’re asking me out… for air? KYRIE: I’m asking you out for… I’m asking you out. TAYUIN: snorts KYRIE: What? What are you doing? TAYUIN: laughs You’re nervous. KYRIE: Is… that funny? TAYUIN: A bit. No, more than a bit. KYRIE: laughs I guess I probably deserve that.  TAYUIN: Absolutely. KYRIE: Then, will you? Come out with me? TAYUIN: If this is your way of paying off the favor… I… haven’t gotten the letter, yet… KYRIE: That’s alright. It has nothing to do with that. When I invited you out before, it was because I felt I owed you something. But this time, I just want… to spend time with you. TAYUIN: Are you… sure? KYRIE: A bit. No. More than a bit.

#ts4 #ts4 screenshots #ts4 story #ts4 bachelor challenge #chosen of the sun #oc: kyrie loren #cc: tayuin eth'salin #oc: elion maharis #sorry guys I accidentally deleted the og post #AHHHHH im so sad #if you could all just rewrite your comments exactly the way they were that'd be great lmfao

[choicesprompts]

Song Rewrite Challenge

This will be just like the Rewrite Challenge and the Rewrite Challenge Holiday Edition, except with songs!

Music often inspires and informs our writing, but what if you straight up took a song and rewrote it as a story using your characters?

Here are a couple of examples:

Betrayal by @nestledonthaveone

Social Climber by @angelasscribbles

The rules are simple:

Pick a song

Rewrite it using your characters

Tell us in the header what song you're using as well as what fandom your characters are from.

Tag @choicesprompts <- This part is very important! It ensures that your story gets seen, reblogged, and added to the master list at the end of the event.

Use the hashtags #choicesprompts and #songrewrite

Post/submit by the deadline, which is January 31st, 2024 11:59 p.m. CST

That's it! This is open to ALL choices fandoms!

Go forth, create, and be great!!!

Tagging the general choices prompts interest list under the cut.

@dcbbw @bebepac @karahalloway @harleybeaumont

@twinkleallnight  @missameliep @jerzwriter @twinkle-320 @aussiegurl1234

@argylemnwrites  @katedrakeohd @peonierose @sillydg

@choicesficwriterscreations

@choicesmonthlychallenge

#choicesprompts #rewrite challenge #choices fandom #choices fanfiction #song rewrite

[aintinacage]

You know I want you. It’s not a secret I try to hide. Forehead Touch | @monthly-challenge

#februfluff2024 #februfluff #monthly challenge #monthly challenge 2024 #forehead touch #the greatest showman #greatest showman #tgs #TGS gifs #rewrite the stars #phillip carlyle #anne wheeler #zendaya #zendaya coleman #zac efron #Zachary efron #musical #musicals #musical gifs

[firstkanaphans]

Build-a-Fanfic Results

Thank you to everyone who has voted in my various polls over the past few days. I’ve had a lot of fun reading the responses and I’m very excited to get started on this fic we have created together!

Just in case you missed one, all of the polls and their respective winners are summarized below:

What should the plot of my next multi-chapter fanfic be? Character A is a virgin who just started dating the campus playboy. He’s nervous about being inexperienced in bed, so he goes to his best friend, Character B, to ask for lessons

Which pairing should be featured in my next multi-chapter fanfic? AkkAyan

Who should play Character A (the virgin) in the chosen plot above? Akk

Whose POV would you like this fic to be written in? Dual/Alternating POVs

Who would you like to play the role of the “campus playboy”? Boeing (from Only Friends)

At the start of this fic, what would you like the nature of Aye’s feelings towards Akk to be? Head-over-heels in love

I will get started writing immediately and imagine I will have the first chapter available within in a week or so. Thank you again for participating 🫶🏻

#y’all really said i want you to rewrite only friends (the fic) but make it MORE angsty 😂 #i hear you #i’m up for the challenge #build-a-fanfic

[laurancezvahlslefteyebrow]

the good ending

#aphmau #minecraft diaries #aphmau fandom #i don’t support aphmau #mcd #minecraft diaries aphmau #aphmau mcyt #mcd aphmau #mcyt #aphblr #aphverse #aphmau oc #mcd oc #minecraft oc #minecraft diaries oc #mcd rewrite #art #digital art #oc art #oc #original character #original character art #oc art challenge

[deception-united]

Last Line Rewrite (Again)

Got back-tagged with this challenge again (thanks to @replayjay for participating!), so why not. This tag game requires you to rewrite the given line, then tag other writers to do the same.

I got the line:

I don't know this little girl, yet the sight of her as she tries to drag her dead fathers body out of my army's way makes me almost want to surrender. then I remembered the taste of victory and forget about her.

Rewrote it as:

The pitiful image of the young girl, tears streaking down her dirt-stained face as she struggled to pull her father's lifeless body from the path of my advancing army, tugs at something deep within me. For a fleeting moment, I feel a pang of empathy, a desire to halt our conquest. But then I cast my gaze back to the horizon, where the spoils of conquest awaited, and the cries of the innocent fade into the background, drowned out by the memory of triumph. The sweet, sweet taste of victory, floods my mind, and any trace of compassion is swept away. I shouldn't care. I don't.

Your line:

He stared down at her, the corners of his eyes crinkling as his lips curl in a crooked smile—a smile, right now, at a time like this, even as she feels the pressure rising as everything comes to a crescendo. Why is he smiling?

Tagging @scribblesbyb, @mossy-melodies, @writing-promptsss, and @writing-unrequited. Have fun ❤

#writeblr #writer tag game #last line rewrite #last line tag #last line challenge #writing #writer things #creative writing #deception-united

[trapezequeen]

“All I Want Is To Fly With You” @monthly-challenge | Day Eleven: Circus

#magicalmarch2024 #gif challenge #greatest showman gifs #zendaya #zendaya coleman #gifset #the greatest showman #my gifs #zac efron #greatest showman #tgs #Anne wheeler #Phillip Carlyle #carwheeler #rewrite the stars #trapeze #trapeze artist #circus #Barnum museum

[fictionadventurer]

Someone yell at me to write my Inklings Challenge story.

#adventures in writing #adventures in the inklings challenge #this was supposed to be the easy part! #i'm watching people put out thousands of words and i'm like howww?? #i can barely rewrite words of already-written sentences #much less write the new parts

[jamespotterthefirst]

My Best Friend's Wedding

I. RUMOR HAS IT

Book: Open Heart (AU)

Pairing: Dr. Ethan Ramsey and MC (Dr. Lilac Allende)

Words: 850

Rating: T

Summary: A childhood friend realizes he's the love of her life. The problem is he's about to marry someone else.

Note: This is my re-write of one of my favorite rom coms ever: My Best Friend's Wedding. Part 1 of two is the Karaoke scene where Julia Roberts tries to sabotage Cameron Diaz and it backfires. This is for @choicesprompts and their Rewrite Challenge! Thank you @jerzwriter for encouraging me to participate!

The crowded bar felt stifling as legions of medical staff packed tightly into its confines. No one seemed to mind, however, since everywhere Morgan looked she was greeted by drunk, laughing faces. All except for one, of course. 

Ethan Ramsey would not be his curmudgeon self if he didn't look like a man about to be waterboarded. His eyes met hers for a fleeting moment, the vivid blue imploring someone—anyone—to put him out of his misery. She stifled laughter, the familiarity of that characteristic disdain of his bringing her the smallest bit of comfort. 

“How much longer do we have to endure this?” he asked as a drunk intern belted a sloppy but admittedly hilarious rendition of I Say a Little Prayer. 

She rolled her eyes, ready to admonish him for being such a spoilsport— just like old times. Someone else beat her to it. 

From beside him, the beautiful brunette laughed—the sound just as perfect as everything else about her. She leaned in close to him, the light catching on a stunning, vintage engagement ring as her hand fell atop his. 

“You're so dramatic, babe,” his fiancée taunted with a smile that exuded pure sunshine. Green eyes fell on Morgan, slightly apologetic. “You'll have to forgive him. He hates upbeat music, fun, and references to organized religion.”

And she was funny, too. Morgan internally had to give her that too. 

Ethan agreed because he indulged Lilac (of course her name had to be beautiful as well) with a lopsided smile that made him appear even more handsome. That shocked Morgan into silence for a moment. In all her time knowing Ethan Ramsey, she could count his genuine smiles on one hand. Then again, the crushing realization fell over her like a torrent. Perhaps she didn't know Ethan anymore. The Ethan she had known never believed in love or marriage, after all. 

Their playful banter escalated and tapered into a modest but sweet kiss. When they pulled apart, Lilac burst at the seams with giddy joy—the type Morgan was a stranger to. It made her stomach churn. 

“Alright,” someone said from the stage. “Who's drunk enough to go next?” 

Drunken cheers and shouts erupted from the bar, each group nominating someone. 

“You should go,” Lilac teased Ethan. 

“God, no.”

She laughed, expecting that exact reaction. Her ring-clad hold tightened on Ethan's arm and something in Morgan came to a boiling point. 

“I have someone better in mind,” she told the couple. Without another word, she marched to the stage and took the microphone from the MC. The crowd whistled and cheered. “Alright everyone, tonight we have a special treat for you. Give it up for the dazzling vocal styling of Doctor Lilac Allende!” 

The cheers in the tiny bar were almost deafening. The pretty brunette was stunned for a moment, glancing at Ethan for reassurance. Expression tight, he shook his head, no doubt advising her not to go if she didn't want to. The crowd, however, was having none of it. A fellow doctor at their hospital all but carried Lilac onto the stage. 

“Rumour Has It by Adele,” Morgan informed the DJ. Then, she pushed the microphone into Lilac's hands as the beat started. Color flushed her freckled face and she looked as though she still hadn't fully recovered from the surprise. 

“Ooh-ooh,” Lilac started into the microphone. “She, she ain't real…”

Morgan returned to her seat, ignoring the glare Ethan threw her way. 

“She ain't gon' be able to love you like I will,” Lilac continued. The more words she sang, the more evident it became that the poor girl could not sing to save her life. Morgan felt a tiny pang of satisfaction at the discovery that the brunette wasn't so perfect after all. 

“Wow,” Morgan laughed. 

Ethan didn't react. 

“Maybe putting her up there wasn't such a good idea. But then again, it's Adele. No one is going to sing that well.”

Blue eyes assessed her like x-rays. 

“Isn't that the point of this circus? To sing badly?” his voice was deathly calm but she could tell there was something more brewing underneath the surface.

At that very moment, the bar erupted into loud cheers and applause as Lilac added a little dance mid-song. She laughed into the microphone, barely able to get the words out. When her eyes fell on Ethan, she winked at him, her spine straightening with confidence. 

“Just 'cause I said it, don't mean that I meant it,” she sang, adding with confidence— “I DID!” 

“But rumor has it, he's the one I'm leaving you for.”

The encouragement from the bar patrons could probably be heard from the hospital across the street. Lilac hopped off stage, still singing, even making her voice playfully seductive. She sauntered to where Ethan sat, trailing one finger along his shoulder as she sang. The man was perfectly still but he tracked her every movement, blue eyes glittering with something heavy and meaningful. The way he looked at her made Morgan feel like an intruder.

The pang in her chest was unbearable.

And with that, Lilac plopped onto his lap, pressing a kiss to his lips as the applause echoed around them. There was no one in the world but them. The way he held her, there was no one in his world but Lilac. 

Morgan looked away.

Notes: I was so in love with Dermot Mulroney in this

Hope you liked it!

The next part is "Speak Now" and should be up soon ❤️

And yes, I am still writing the masquerade mini series lol. I just got swept up in this idea. The heart wants what it wa-a-a-a-ants lol

#ethan ramsey #open heart #ethan x mc #playchoices #choicesprompts #Rewrite challenge #rewritechallenge