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h0ney-mochi · 1 year

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hi do you write for afab characters? if so may i request bratty sub afab scara x soft dom reader ^^

afab!Scaramouche x soft dom!reader ;; readers pronouns not mentioned

SMUT/NSFW CONTENT (bratty!sub!scaramouche, afab!scara, soft dom!reader, fingering, praise, mirror involved ig)

Summary: Scara was being a brat and once you two are alone together again.. he can't help but beg for you to speed up your fingers.

A/n: YES I DO GRRRHHH YES I think afab, trans scara is funky <3 I don't think I did brat scara well, so my bad ):

Minor writer, dni if uncomfortable!

"Listen, if you're going to spend so much time doing nothing, you might as well go do something else," Scaramouche groans, crossing his arms, head leaning on your shoulder. You knew he was needy, but why rush? A brat like him won't get everything right away. Besides, where's the fun in getting everything done rigjt away?

You just chuckled, pressing another kiss on the back of his neck. The slight shiver didn't go unnoticed from you. You had him sit on your lap, legs spread. There was a mirror across the room, allowing you to see Scara's face, the way he furrows his brows when your lips meet the mark on his skin.

You traced your hands on his thighs, up to his stomach, obviously avoiding where he wanted your touch. "You haven't been good today, dear," you whispered, frowning a little, "I can't reward you so easily, don't you know?" Scaramouche groans, about to say something, but you slide your fingers between his folds.

It wasn't entirely a surprise that he was already so wet, but hey..

You watched your fingers in the mirror. Slow, teasing movements from you had him sighing and groaning in annoyance. Yeah, you touched him, but c'mon-! That's not it!

He moves his hips towards your fingers, but you take them away. "Oh, you-! [Name]!" Scara whines, glaring at you in the mirror. You lock eyes with him while your other hand held his thigh. "Be patient, Scara. Let me take care of you," You speak with a soft smile. He furrows his brows, "Can't you do that faster?" Your chuckle made him shiver a little.

You didn't respond, instead pushing two fingers inside him. You feel him jolt a little, a pathetic moan escaping his mouth. You were slow with it, pushing your fingers in and out while your other hand rubbed circles on his thigh. Scaramouche was saying things of wanting you to speed up, throwing in a curse or two. You didn't say anything back, eyes still focusing on his face.

That eye contact was irritating him at first. Why are you not responding? Why are you just staring at him?? Rude. He does stare back at you, whining more about you teasing him. Of course, it doesn't faze you. Just Scaramouche being.. him. A brat. Oh well. You're used to it, you know how to put him back in place somehow. Even if you don't know what you're doing.

You didn't notice Scara slowly becoming more.. quiet on the curses. Yes, he was still whining about your fingers, but.. it wasn't.. It wasn't the previous tone, he was getting desperate. You only noticed it when he was breaking eye contact with you. Quick glances.

Then you became fully aware.

"Mmmh, please- Please just- Faster, please—!" He whines again, breathing in. You did what he wanted and sped up your fingers. You couldn't help but grin at the way Scara moaned in response. Your other hand held his hip down.

"Ah," you sighed into his neck, making him shiver, eyes locking onto yours. "You're gonna be good for me now?" You ask, lidding your eyes. The noise from your fingers fucking into him has Scara feeling just a bit of embarrassment.

"Yes, yesyesyes I'll- fuck, I'll be good—!" He nods his head, which makes you chuckle, "Please just— I want more! Pleaashe-!" You move your other hand to circle around his core, making him immediately jolt in surprise.

Soon enough he's holding onto your arm, gasping at how quick you are. "Too- too much-! Fuck, mmmhg AH- FUCK please, mgonna cum, gonna cum—!!" Scara moans out, eyes rolling back. You kiss his neck before speaking, "Look at me. I want you to look at me when you cum."

He does as you say and your fingers speed up just a little. His moans and pleas sound like a melody. Then he's chanting your name and that he's close. You won't deny him.

He's still holding eye contact with you somehow, face feeling hot, feeling some embarrassment from how you stare at him. Then Scara sees a grin on your face as you whisper in his ear.

"Be a good boy and cum on my fingers, won't you?"

Thank you for the request and thank you for waiting! Hope you enjoy the taste <3

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michelleleewise · 2 years

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Forget Me Not

Pairing: Loki x Reader

Warnings: angst, mind manipulation, mentions of memory loss, mentions of injury, anger, depression, sadness, crying, dehydration, exhaustion, all the angst, no happy ending to be seen.........yet

Summary: Loki talks Wanda into helping with his memory, while you try to hold yourself together.

Part three--Part Four-

"Wanda, please. I am begging you, I need to know." Loki said, following wanda down the hall, Thor in tow. "I don't know, what if I make it worse?" She asked turning to him. "I'm not sure how it could be worse." He said fidgeting with his hands. "Fine, but of something happens.." She started "You will not be to blame, this is on me." Loki said as Thor nodded. "Alright. Come on, the sooner the better." She said heading to her room.

Thor sat on the couch as Loki sat in a chair wanda brought out. She stood behind him as she raised her hands to his temples "for the record Loki, I hope this works. You two were great together." She said as her hands glowed red. "Are you ready?" She asked. "Yes, I'm ready." Loki said closing his eyes. "Ok here goes nothing." She said as her fingers touched his temples.

He gasped, gripping the sides of the chair as flashes of the last year flooded his mind. "Do you want me to stop?" He heard "no, I'm fine. Keep going." He said through gritted teeth.

"Hi, im y/n. It's nice to meet you." She said smiling. "Loki of Asgard and Jotunhiem." He said shaking her hand.

"Loki, come look at this." You said as he came in the kitchen. As he leaned down you smeared the pie in his face, laughing. "You will pay for that dear." He said wiping his face, smiling, as you squealed and ran away as he grabbed you from behind, rubbing his face on yours "I just want to share darling." You both laughed as he held you to him.

"Darling, can I ask you something?" He asked looking at you "Sure, what's up Mischief?" You asked sitting up. "Would you allow me to take you out?" He asked fidgeting with his hands. You looked around before looking back at him. "Me?" You asked "Well yes, of course you." He smiled. "Umm. Yeah, I'd love to." You smiled.

Evey memory He ever made with you flashed through his mind, he felt tears streaming down his face as each one passed "Loki?" He heard Thor "im fine." Until the last memory came, the day of the mission.

"Darling, how would you feel about moving in together?" He asked holding your hand, cuddled on the couch. "Loki, I would love nothing more." You smiled as he leaned over gently kissing you. "I hope to one day be worthy enough to make you my wife." He smiled as you cupped his cheek "You have always been worthy Loki." You smiled back.

He looked across the field, seeing Thor's hammer whiz past your head as he ran towards you. "LOKI, STOP!!" He heard you yell, and then.....

Wanda pulled her hands away as he gasped, panting heavily as his fingers gripped the sides of the chair. "Brother? Are you alright?" Thor asked walking over. "I saw it, all of it, her." He panted, tears streaming down his face. "Do you still have the memories after the accident?" Thor asked as Loki looked down "Yes, I do." He whispered, more tears falling. "How could I do that Thor? How could I be with anyone but her?" Loki sobbed. "You did not remember, it was not your fault." Thor tried to reassure him. "I betrayed her Thor! I love her and I....with Melissa, i...." he tried, putting his head in his hands.

"Rigjt now, we must focus on finding her. I worry about about how she's doing." Thor said as Loki tried to compose himself. "What if....after what I did, she won't want to come back?" Loki asked looking at him. "We must try Loki, if nothing then to make sure she's safe." Loki nodded as he stood. "Thank you Wanda, i...what is the saying....owe you one." He said looking at her. "Im glad I could help, now bring y/n home and we're even." She smiled as Loki nodded.

You slowly opened your eyes, seeing the stars "did I sleep all day?" You said to yourself, slowly sitting up. You hadn't remembered dreaming, your mind a void. You remembered seeing Loki but then he was gone. You shook your head, as you slowly made it to your knees, looking out over the dark ocean. "I better head back." You said to yourself, slowly making it to your feet. You drug yourself back to your little house, going in seeing everything as it was when you left.

You sighed, grabbing some water and downing it before looking for something to eat. You didn't feel like building a fire so you just grabbed some bread and peanut butter you had gotten from the village last week. You sat at the small table, instinctively twirling the necklace you had on, a silver snake wrapped around a green gem.

"I want you to have this darling. In case anything happens, I'll always be able to find you." Loki said clasping the necklace on you. "But how?" You had asked looking at it. "I have placed a small amount of my Siedr into it, so what I carry in me can reach out to it and tell me where you are." He smiled running his finged over the chain.

You had hoped many times that it would glow, or give you some sign Loki was looking for you, but it never came, he never came. You wanted to be angry, but you couldn't. All that was left was sadness and acceptance. You knew Loki was ok, and that's what mattered. He had Thor, and the other avengers. He had.....her. it didn't matter what happened to you, as long as he was happy and ok.

You had always wanted the best for him, and deep down you hoped that's what she was doing, even though it felt like a stab in the heart. Had he seen the letter? Did anyone even tell him about it? Had Melissa found it and thrown it out? You couldn't blame her if she did.

You finished your sandwich, still feeling groggy you decided to lay down again, hoping you would feel better tomorrow. You climbed in bed, pulling the blankets up to you chin as you closed your eyes, hoping no dreams would come to you. As you drifted off, tugging the blankets closer to you, you missed the dim green glow emitting from your necklace.....

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maxthesillyy · 5 days

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I NEED TO KISS WHOEVER MADE THE LIFE IS STRANGE BEFORE THE STORM BACKGROUND MUSIC. RIGJT NOW. THAT GIY AND THE ARTIST WHO MADE THE SONGS. WHERE ARE THEY. I NEED TO BOW DOWN TO THEM. I NEED TO RIP THEM TO SHREDS. I NEED TO SHAKE THEM AND YELL AT THE, BECAUSE WHAT THE FUCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK I LOVE ITNSO MUCH IRS MAKING ME MENTALLY ILLLLLLLLLLLL RAHHGTGRGRGRGRGRGRG I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THEM

#my favorite LIS game is the prequel just because of the GODDAMN SOUNDTRACK AND THE FUCKING BACKGROUNDJSHDHDGGRGRGRGR #:’3 #lis #lis bts #life is strange #life is strange before the storm #IM CRYING WHY IS IT SO GOODDDFHTGGRGRGRGGRGR

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spitinsideme · 3 months

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What are some other gay ships you like besides ragapom?

mae x jules from.the show devil in ohio .. i dont think ajyone understands my love for this ship and i jate how little fanfiction anf fanart tgere is of this show in general. i love this show so much devil in ohio os 5hr best show rver but i jst wsnt to say rigjt now that theg fucked the ending uo bevsude it coukd have been MORE like it shpukd hae bern MORE !!! tbe thing that happened between mae and jules was literally made up fakr drama tjat jules would have never even started at that point in their friendship, it was drama athat wpukd have nrver occured woth the way they were progresseing and the friendship stage they were in ajd i jate how it was played out it wad so fake it was so forxed and i hated it. i hated the ending i jated everything aboit the last fee episofes becaude it felt rushed it felt like the point wss to just show how fucmed this girl was and how she ruins everythinf and how manipulative she is in just 4 episodes and it wad so .. weord becsude she was progressing so well !!! itwas so out of noehere, especially taht drama between jules best friend oscar or soem bullshit and mae ??? likr its not maes failt tjat people went to her or that she got popular, and jules wpuld havr mevrr blamed it on mae at thay point becaude cjaracayer develolment had occured !!! idontknow .. i really like that ship and id love to makr fanart for it one day

claudia x grace from tbe movie my first summer. this movie was suorrduorr amaizng it was a lesbian movie i watxhed last yesr when i was on a lesbian binge mmovir and i estcbed many obscure lesbian videos ( i remdver i wtched an italian bdsm gay mpvie whrre these two girls played .. sensual sadistic hide and seek ????? it was odd .. 10/10 movie ) but ky first sumer wad greta i mens it wa sad it had an ambiguois open ending as most lesbia movies do but overall i llved itsoosmuch and tbeir kiss wss so fucking sdorsble everythinf about it wad sosos adorable and i hate hoe its not even popular ??? not many peope have wstxhe dit when its the BEST lesbian mocie ever its my favrouote literlaly ever !!! theres nnot much fsnart of fansgiction for ir rither whoch SUCKS !! i wsnt to ome dya mske it for them

laura lee x lottie from the show yellowjackets. i feel like ay this point you understand that i love my ships to have religious symbolism, something religious is going on behind it, and also, blonde x brunette !! i dontknow if aby of you have watched it but SPOILER INCOMING !!!!!!!! aftet they had their HOT AND SPICY AND HOMOEROTIC baptism scene on thwir lake i was lime woah !!! i wa ssososure they woukd have had a little will they wont they situation, a little ooo they might kiss but they probbaly wont because laura lee is cathcokix and has intrrnalised homiphobiaaas !!!! or whatrver ixonfknow bit then SHE FUCKING DIES. AND I WANT YOU ALL TO KNOW WHEN SHE DIED I STOPPED WATCHING I NEEDED TO TAKE A BREAK !!I TOOK A LOMG THREE WEK BREAK FROM YELLOEJSCKETS BECAUDE EVERYTHING I SAW, EVERYRHINF I WATCHED, EVERYTHINF REMINDED ME OF LAURA LEE AND IT HURT ME !!! IT HURT THAT I CPULDNT SEE MORR OF HER AND THAT SHE COUKDNT HAVE BEEN MORE AND THAT SHE WAS JUST THE CATHOLIX GIRL THATS ALL SHE WAS AND THATD ALL SHE DIED AS !!! AND I HATE THAT EVEN NOW I HAVE MEVER GOTTEN SO ATTACHED TO A CAHARCYRR !!! SOMETIMSI CRY REMDMEBRRONG SHES DEAD AND WILL NEVER GET TO BE MORE AND HAVE MORE AND BE COMPLEX AND SHOW HER COMPLEX THINGS !!! IT SUCKS !!!

emaline x kate from the show everything sucks. firstly, the show fucks anf i think metflix shpuld like lesbians more i mean comeon ee get ONE lesbian canon relationshio and sufdenly CNACELLED !!! we have to fucking neg for scrapes and secondly, MY FUCKING GOODDD !!!! GOOD FUCKING GOD !!! BECAUDE WHEN I SAW KATE REACH ITO HER TROUSERS WHILST LOOKONG AT THISE SEDUCTIVE PITTLR IMAGES OF WOMAN I SCREAMR DI FUCKING SCREAMED I SCREAMED LIKE A FUCKING BANSHEE AT A PRIDE PARADE !!!! I WAS SO HAPPY SHE WAS GAY !!! and when kate and emaline kissed .. i was so hapoyy i had to lause to jsut love in the moment for a bit .. theyre the best evet .. i esnt to make fanart for them .... sigh ... not enough fabart of fansfiction about them ...

enid x wednesday is also prety cute !! im not like reallyrealy imto it but its alright also im going to take a moment to beat that fucking xavierd ass i hate him do much i hope he dies its nlt even because he was a love interestedi mena that sucmed too but its becayse hes so fucking annoyong oooo my dad id alwayd on the roll or whatever and im depresseddd so i male art because im a sad fucjing srtist god go fucking get therapy stop fucking being a cunt i hate him so much

thats it .. i think .. if i remeber more ill uodate this ...

#yippeee !!!!#my ships !!!#as you can tell they are ALL blonde x brunette #and most have some little catholic spice #some religious symbolism #i fucking eat that dhit up

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tickingispleasure · 5 months

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I just thought about some old memories from school and auddenly I thought about my old perv history teacher from this time amd the day he invited me for watching a documentary abouz I don't remember.

He said I can sit wherever I like and I fantasize about whaz could've happened if I sat rigjt next to him. He would lay his hand on my thigh and touches it now and then getting me slowly wet and distracted from the video. Even would come closer to me which lets me freeze in my chair and breath heavy while his touches get closer to the middle. The other hand woukd slowly touch one of my big titzies I didn't even care to hide. After teasing me into being a horny wez student he woukd start to finger my wet pussyy and grow bigger in his tight jeans so I would see his hard buldge inky to get more wet and horny wanting to be his goid girl. He would seee my desperate face hear me moan a little unzil his kiss meets my wet drooly mouth. He's playing with my tongue while fingering my oussy ready until I'm so desperate I beg him to fuck me or to suck his cockk. He woukd agree and put his uncovered cock in my drooly mouth so I can suck like tjis is everything I've wanted in my whole life. Once he's hard and big enougj he outs me on his lap and forces his whole cock inaide my needy hot pussy only ti het me moaning so loud if anyone would be around this abandoned classroom they would've join us.

Thinking about this ggets me so goddamn horny i csnt stol fingerring and rubbint my needdy oussyy ahhh

#hypnokink #hypnosis #hypnotized #obedient #spirals #mindless toy #obedient toy #doll #drooling #Pendulum #Teacher fantasy

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epiclamer · 1 year

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wait are you married or just dating?

@save-the-villainous-cat me and wife material right here arw just dating at the moment but like imma marry her i love her so much im so in love with her shes so beautiful and im so in lover with her shes like so hot too i love her shes like my soulmate like she s so pretty like i wanna kiss her a lots and imma marry she she deserves a ring and like so kuch love and imma give it to her immma love her for ever and werr gonna marry like tomorroq i wanna marry in tomorrow or like today works too like shes mine like so pretty and shes so cute and she have the cutest smile and like eeeeeeejshnwmw i could acrially stare at her gor hours like she hath consumes me entirely like i love her like serouysly like im in lover with her and like she deserves marriage like yoday like rigjt jow like imma gmarry her right now and like she makes me so haptk and imma marry her and j love you vammbabg im. I. Lovevyouw cat li i logve you baby marry me now today pleade

#Muuaaahhh #Sloppy wnkiss for you baby #O love you cat #Kiss me marry me jow

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wildeered · 20 days

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fuuuuck those toys are so pretty i wanna ride that double sided dildo with you until you get sick of my annoying squirming and whining and starting rutting it further into me and its hitting my cervix and our tdicks are kissing with every thrust and ajdhshsjsb sorry i might be a little horny rn hhhh i have three fingers in me rigjt now but i want more more more

Need to have needy gross sex like this with someone so bad 😵‍💫 please, only the idea of both of our holes being filled until our tdicks kiss is making me so wet hhhhh

#ftm nsft #nsft asks #queer nsft #asks open

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kiawren · 21 days

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(I'M SORRY IF THIS IS A DUPE i'm afraid tumblr ate my ask 💔💔💔)

kiawren on the beach! (don't forget sunscreen!) if you like being in the water, imagine splashing some on kiawe, and you have a little splash fight. or maybe you want to play beach volleyball with him for a bit, taking breaks to hydrate yourselves. he smiles the widest when he sees you having fun!

you write each other's initials in the sand, a little imprinting of your love. perhaps you want to sit under the parasol and relax, and he joins you. if there are two chairs under one, he'll hold your hand—and he could kiss you, but only with your express permission. it's a bit different from being in the rain, all the same, it's reminiscent...

kiawe cherishes you so much!!!

HEY I'M SO SORRY FOR ANSWERING THIS SO LATE. I PROMISE I AM SOO HAPPY TO RECEIVE IT I'VE JUST BEEN BUSY LATELY AND NEEDED TIME TO PROPERLY RESPOND BUT. WAS SMILING SO HARD WHEN I READ IT!

Beach dates are sooo us YOU GOT THAT SO CORRECT... Omg yes and the weather here has been so hot it feels like 39 degrees celsius so playing in the water is soo fun to imagine I haven't been to the beach this year now I want to go 😭😭

Idk how to play volleyball but it'll be so fun for him to teach me and I'll fumble so bad but it'll full of laughter.... also bonus if our friends are there there's actually a beach episode of them and a scene of them playing volleyball!!

"He smiles the widest when he sees you having fun"💥💥💥💥💥💥😭😭 YOURE SO RIGJT HE DOES.... OH MAN I LOVE HIM

THE WRITING INITIALS IN THE SAND STOPP /POS THAT'S TOO CUTE MAYBE WE'LL LIE NEXT TO THE HEART WITH OUR INITIALS IN IT AND TAKE A PICTURE💥💥💥‼️‼️

"he'll hold your hand—and he could kiss you" Bye. I'm Dead /pos. Bye anon.

THIS WAS SO CUTE THABK YOU SM...!!!!

#I APPRECIATE IT SO MUCH GENUINELY😭#you got us sooo right #THANK YOU ONCE AGAIN #kiawren #fav #asks!

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lyriakisser · 1 year

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!!! thabjs :] i dont think its super impressive since i basically rely on internet knowledge + help from my mom but ywah !!! also thats kinda cool uu can do thay kind of stuff in mexico :O !!! ive nvr heard of anyplace like that here in the us but also. i dont leave the house so LMAO nd yeah !! talking to eachother is so important but i think we shld kiss I MEAN :explodes:

FOR SOMEONE THAT KNOWS LIKE NOTHING ABOUT THAT STUFF YOU ARE PRETTY IMPRESSIVE TO ME ALRIGJT HRKSNTNDNT and yeahg!!!!!! in Mexico we have these. places where you can buy videogames and anime and tech related stuff in general and theyare sososoosooooo cool... my parents brought me to one thats at the capital and GODDAMB IT WAS FUCKING HUGE if i wasnt specifically searching for PMMM merch i think i would have gone insane looking at like. absolutely everything else JDKSNGBWNGBBF iwant to go to the one that's at my city again so badd bwaaaaaaaaaa... i know i wont find anything related to the stuff i like but I CAN STILL DREAM OKAY RJSKGKDKGJ al so you ar eso rigjt!!!!!!!! we should kiss so much right now!!!!;;--!!!!!!! straight pride!💖

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menshusband · 1 year

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if Barbatos doesn't kiss me rigjt now right this instant i WILL explode <- not lying

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dottores · 2 years

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I JUST READ THE CHALTWR SMD IM 🤭🤭🤭🤭 had to try so hard not to moan 😔💔💔 anyways BEFORE I GO TO SLEEP I’m gonna tell you what i think 🤭🤭

splitting it again bc it makes it a lot easier n feels more organized ig? so yeah !!

listen ik i talk a lot about the way you present the characters but i can’t oh my god i csnt stop. i’ll start off with ran again n i hope it won’t be too long so !! there’s so much to say about the past part i was not okay i was about to scream and throw up and cry why would you do that to me 💔💔 i’ve noticed you always describe rans words as sharp and sometimes even loud and when i talk ab rin i’ll mention the difference and how important i think it is 🤭🤭 not only do i think it’s extremely fitting, but that one word always sets the mood and pace for the next few paragraphs at least if h get what i mean. throughout the majority of tjr chapters, rans tone is being presented as very..asserting? i guess? and it’s such a small smalll tiny detail but it does wonders for, not only his character and character development, but also for understanding him and rins AND him and yns relationship. a lot of the time his sharp tone isn’t even menacing, it’s more grounding and in some situations, asserting. i think someone else mentioned how ran is big on eye contact snd i think that this AND the eye contact thing is jusy so… intimate idk how else to explain it. yn is always shying away from their gazes but also their words and i think tnst ran using a more firm tone in situations where yn may be a little…yk unwell or overstimulated is so beautiful to read idk i love it im just 🤭🤭🤭💗💗💗💗 and oh my gof in this chapter… when the roles were reversed and it was ran being unable to meet her eyes, ran holding his tongue because and not even being able to speak, ran being more vulnerable and emotional than we’ve ever seen him… i cant i had to stop reading for a second i jsut,, the roles being reversed was so interesting snd i didn’t expect it AT ALLL. and the way he made her promise??? i love that ran is big on eye contact and yk yn using her words bc that’s EXACTLY HOW I SEE HIM AND I LOVE THSY YOU WRIYE HIM THIS WAY !! wanna give you a kiss for showing us a more vulnerable side of him im screaming oh my god…

that’s enough of ran for now idw it to b too long 💔💔 BUT oh my FUCKING GOD the way you reversed the roles between ran and yn, RIGJT SFTER DOING TJR SAME W RSN SND RIN?? i’m so used to seeing the words “sharp” and “hissed” being used with ran i had to do a double take n reread the paragraph to make sure it was rin you were talking about. this definitely counts as cjaracter development to me and it was so beautifully done i can’t even think of a better way for that scene to have been depicted tbh. rindou has always been the more shy? and just generally softer one between the two (at least with yn 🤭🤭) so seeing tnst drastic change and watching HIM get fed up was so insane i never knew i needed it tnst bad. i don’t think ive ever really talked about rin much but god i love how you write him so much i csnt think of anyone tnst writes the brothers as well as you im jsut.. oh my god. i love the way you emphasize the tone they’re using but it’s done in such a smooth way idk how to explain it but i hope you get what i mean 🤷🏻‍♀️🤷🏻‍♀️ “rindous voice was sharper than it ever had been with you” and “help us understand, we want to understand” give me a moment i’m going to sob i csnt do this rn. he sounds so desperate and so fed up at the same time and idk if that’s what you were going for but it completely changed the mood for the entire past bit and made it so much more emotional (to me at least 🤭) it’s just so heartbreaking i had to stop AGAIN you can’t keep doing this to me cat i’m going to cry soon. the scene where rindou and yn were arguing and when she mentioned her uncle yk the bit, every single one of yns dialogues ended so abruptly because rindou cut her off every single time and oh my god… i cannot do this it’s far too late for this why would you do that. it adds to the mood but also the pacing i said this last time but holy fuck your pacing is absolutely amazing reading your works is always just the best because you know how to set a mood, and how to make sure it matches the pace and it just goes together so well if that makes sense i can’t find the words atm but whatever. both yn and rindou were so desperate in that scene but their desperation was written in different ways and i csmt even begin to find the words to tell you how fucking impressive tnst is?? you wrote?? two desperate people??? arguing??? but both of them??? we’re desperate in completely different ways??? OH TKDJISNAISHISZ i absolutely admire the little details in your writing i csnt fo this. before i move on from characters and thei developments (i barely wroye ab the development im sorry sob 💔💔💔💔 but jsut know tnst i haven’t read any pieces, in any fandom, that had character development as good as yours, i’ll talk ab it next time tho 💗🫶🏼) i said i was also going to mention the differences in rsn and rindous way of speech. i already said ran has a sharper and more firm and asserting tone, whereas rindou is a lot more soft spoken (especially w yn) and not as assertive as ran is. alone it’s already great but seeing you wriye them both TOGETHER AND reversing their roles is nothing short of impressive i’m absolute and completely in awe of your understanding of them and, not just their separate personalities, but also their personalities TOGETHER and with yn.

anyways moving on !! i wanted to mention your use of analogies involving the sky and weight. it’s repeated in many chapters and in different ways based on the context, but it’s so??? effective?? like it adds so much to the story but also to our understanding of the characters ESPECIALLY yn seeing as it is used on her the most i’ve noticed. i’ll never stop talking ab how much i love that you didn’t just forget about yn but you continue to build and develop her ever chapter it’s so refreshing i love it.

i won’t speak about pacing on its own because i think that i mentioned it a lot in the other bits but AAGIN YOUR USE OF REPETITION IS SO SOOSOSOSOS BEAUTIFUL and well placed and just genuinely perfect to me. it says eitjer slows everythint down or speeds it up or does both and makes me dizzy (in a good way 💗💗) but either way it’s so perfect, especially here with the repetition AND the bold font to emphasize certain phrases. it doesn’t just emphasize it, it changes the tone and has you reading the repeated phrase differently snd it changes so much if you get what i mean. speaking of repetition actuslly, the sky thing isn’t the only thing you repeat in chapters,, the paragraph about how her uncle said smth sb jump starting and all that you knwo the one, everytime you repeat something ESPECIALLY IF ITD IN ANOTJER CHAOTER, it jsut adds so much to it like the way i read it, it almost sounds like she’s trying to remind herself and using tnst as justification for her actions so the guilt doesn’t get to her snd tnst desperation is fucking doubled everytime its repeated THIS MIGJG NOT MSKE SENSE BC ITS LIGERSLLY 4 AM HERE BUJT WHSTEVER ITS OKAY 🤭🤭

last thing !! the way you subtly mention characters is so cool like, izana was barely mentioned in tnst one chapter. all you said was his hair was white and his eyes were purple and then boom he ends up being one of the most impoetstn characters for both yn and the entire stories development. you briefly mentioned mikey in a similar way at one point as well and it’s been fucking my head up bc i’m trying to figure out if ur doing it again cat please stop playing with my head i am gonna pass out 🙏🙏 ALSO hanma bring mentioned at the end of this chapter made me giggle a little bit bc k hate him but i don’t but i really do but i love the way you write him and i want him to come back im waiting on hanma to make an appearance so i can actuslly talk ab him cuz i love the sys you write him. OH AND the quick change in mood between the past and present bits had my head reeling i loved it 🤭🤭

ANYWAYS THIS IS SOSOSOEHODJS LONG but ig it sort of makes up for the fact that i LIGERSLLY DIDNT WRITE SNYTBINT FOR THE KASY CHAOTWR even tho it’s one of my faves so far but it’s okay. IM SORRU ITS SO LONG BUT HESH POINT IS LDA IS SOSJOWHSJSKSDNJSIAJZKANSKSJZ🤭🤭🤭💗💗💔💔💔💔💔💔🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼🫶🏼💓💓💓💓💓👍😔😔😔😔😔😔😔😔🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 if you get what i mean :p y never disappoint and k was actuslly do stressed cuz i have school again tomorrow and idw go but you made my night i can sleep well now thanks 🤭🤭

ANYWYS BYE BYE ILY 💋💋🤭🤭🤭

SOBS I DONT THINJ ILL EVER BE ABLE TO CONVEY ENOUGH HOW MUCH I LOVE YOU 🥹 DONT EVER APOLOGIZE FOR IT BEINF LONG I SWEAR IT MAKES ME SO HAPPY EVERY TUME no bc deadass :((( i literally cried when i read this ask, and i read it like 40 times. i dont even know where to start sobs you literally catch all of the little things i put in there and hope that ppl will catch -- like the switch up with rindou, and the brief appearance of izana who ended up being a huge character. AND THE WAY RAN ACTS WITH READER. YES. OMG. HE IS ONE HUNDRED PERCENT ASSERTIVE LIKE THAT AS A WAY TO KEEP HER GROUNDED AND PAYING ATTENTION TO THEM OTHERWISE HE KNOWS DAMN WELL THAT SHE'LL EITHER TRY TO SLIP AWAY OR CHANGE THE SUBJECT OR EVEN WHEN SHE'S JUST GETTING OVERWHELMED.

AND RINDOU'S SWITCH UP IN THE AIRPORT DUDE. i had so much fun writing that bc he had always been the one shielding her from ran when they were younger bc ran would lose his temper and get snappy with her. like not only was it jarring for HER but honestly it was jarring for me to write bc i was so used to having him being the mediator between the two of them.

omg the analogies with the sky/atlas is some of my favorite parts to add in there bc she rlly does feel like the whole weight of the world is on her shoulder, and her and izana had been so big on different types of mythologies that thinking back to it and relating the pressure on her to myths that they had talked about is honestly kind of a comfort for her, if it makes sense.

AND YES omg the repetition with the mention of the uncle is 100% her trying to (1) justify to herself what she was doing and (2) convince herself that it was the only viable choice.

hanma. hehe.

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