Happy first WBW of 2024! In the spirit of new beginnings, what's an element of your worldbuilding that you've gone back and tweaked several times?
Happy new year!!
For Rising Shards, there's a backstory element I've gone back and forth tons on. The original drafts kind of ended up the story of the current series' parent generation, so I've debated a ton on how to include it or even if I should include it in the main series. My main argument against is the parent generation story is very Star Wars-y and big and emotional and filled with good and evil and wars and such, but does that really fit with a cozy series about cute girls falling in love? My argument for is that Rising Shards is lots of things, not just cute girls, and I've already made it canon so it's been a matter of how to use it than how not to.
Back and forth I've been like, "Hm maybe the parents can be explained in the first book. Well I've changed this greatly and the first book is gonna be a web novel that's more slice of life. What do I do with this manuscript and this story about exiles on a big adventure? Well let's cut it and make it its own series. But it would be cool if like Zeta like experiences this somehow like watching a movie or finding a book about it or something. But IDK when will I have time for that in story. And doesn't it wreck the tone? Time to push it away, maybe it should be its own series. Let's do a clean break and cut it out of RS continuity cuz I wanna use these drafts for something! Ahhh but I included the backstory and mentioned it pretty specifically so why should I have two stories that are like the same thing? Maybe I should include it in RS and finally tell this story."
So my thought for this year (after reading the fantastic manga 20th Century Boys which juggled multiple time periods well) is to have it as the past that may be a bit dramatic but it's in the world building so I do want to explain all that, have it be a flashback that doesn't overwhelm the main story or take away from the slice of life present, so I can finally get some of these story beats I've been daydreaming about out there because my other methods don't feel right.
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Prompt 274
You know what is fun? Baby Ghost Jason. You know what could be even more fun? Ghosts are Dragons.
Jason? Aware of none of this.
He was on comms, y’know listening and rolling his eyes at Dickwing, who used his real name, really Dick, he mocks. It’s just a stakeout, nothing new there, honestly boring when he could be blowing something up instead. It should have just been a stakeout.
Yet there’s something suddenly there, something behind him. Something that causes his hair to stand on end and his comms to spark into static like some sort of horror movie. Something, something with clawed hands with corpse-pale skin tipped in black, stained or dead or something else, tilting his head up and up and up as he’s frozen.
“A child, out here? Alone?” a voice crackles, hisses, hums, and purrs, somehow all at once, unnatural in its tone. He can’t move, he needs to move, he has to move, but it’s like the space around him has gone cold and dead, like he’s stuck in the Pits once more as claws hold his head and his vision blurs. “Sleep, child. Rest- we’ll be home soon.”
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when u just came back from the dead—i mean um—uh from..running away from ur dad…only for him to forbid u to go on a mission with everyone else bcs he hates you (he doesnt he just wants u to be safe and he wont forgive himself if u get hurt badly)
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I keep seeing people bitching about "uwu when I say 'from the river to the sea' people say I'm calling for geeenocide! They say I'm antisemitic!" and like.
Maybe. instead of clinging to a phrase that a bunch of white leftists have co-opted because they think it sounds nice. And digging your little immature heels in. You should LISTEN when people tell you that yes. The phrase's FUCKING ORIGIN was a call for the eradication of Jews from the area known as Israel and Palestine. That NO, you cannot divorce it from those roots. YES, it IS still used to mean that TO THIS DAMN DAY.
And look. Maybe you DON'T think that Israelis should all be killed and/or exiled from Israel and Palestine. Maybe you DON'T think that the genocide of an entire people is the solution. Maybe you DON'T hate Jews and want all of us dead. And if that's the case? Great!
But how the FUCK are we supposed to tell the difference when you are using the EXACT same phrase as countless people who DO want those things. People who DO hate Jews, who ARE supportive of organizations that want to commit violence, people who SUPPORT what happened on October 7th?
When people tell you "hey, this phrase means something else, it has ALWAYS come from those roots, and using it is NOT OKAY because it is STILL used as a rallying cry for violence against Israelis and Jews worldwide", the way to react? Is NOT to fucking double down and use it.
Because that? DOES make you an antisemite. And if I see you using that phrase? Then I MUST assume that at best, you do not know what it means and have SOMEHOW avoided the countless Jews and non-Jews I have seen talking about it, or at WORST you actively hate me and want me and every single one of my people dead.
And frankly? You are not worth that risk to interact with.
Stop saying it. There are SO many ways to support Palestine, the Palestinian people, and their fight for rights, that do not involve spouting genocidal, antisemitic rhetoric. it is NOT HARD.
But apparently, some of y'all are insistent on being racist.
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all but ONE of these is a real thing in the series. some are badly described but still true. if you know the answer don’t give it away; I wanna know how fake these sound to people who haven’t read the books
reblogs appreciated!
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Just finished rereading the first Bartimaeus book and yeah, yeah, I can see why I loved these books so much as a child :>
I feel like these illustrations aren't 100% faithful to the source material but maybe they're how Bart wished things happened, you know??
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Who has the other pair of his shoes. I don’t believe you can buy a red and black pair
good question! i hadn't thought about it until you asked so here's the answer i came up with:
he got them at a discount at the thrift store
the cashier just saw his excitement and couldn't bear to charge him the full price
they aren't even the same style of slides, this silly guy just marches to the beat of his own drum
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