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ventisapple25 · 3 months

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Hmm..lets do a yandere!Scara shall we?

(Pic not mine)

Also this can also be seen as wanderer or

kunikuzushi(kabukimono)

Lets do this in Smut style

Dead dove do not eat.

Bad grammar

Masterbation

Non consensual(??)

Somnophilia(??)

Stalking

Creep

Scaramouche

OOC

Please notify me if theres anymore

Yandere!Scara who would climb your window as a habit and just finds you one day masterbating

Yandere!Scara who would get hard when you struggle to pleasure yourself and wished that your fingers were him instead

Yandere!Scara who NEEDS to go to your room to fuck you and WANTS you to feel pleasure with him

Yandere!Scara who one day decides he cant take it anymore and came through your window to sneak into your room while you sleep

Yandere!Scara He jerks off watching you peacefully sleep with your mouth open

Yandere!Scara When he set his hand's pace he shoots out his strings of cum into your body

Yandere!Scara Who would open his eyes to see you covered in his liquid and he admires you

Yandere!Scara who gets out of his trance and gets wipes from the side of your desk and cleans you up leaving the cum thats on your mouth only

Yandere!Scara who then kisses you on the cheek and goes to the window then takes one a camera out of his pocket and takes a pic

Yandere!Scara who then leaves the pic and everything that halpend buried into his mind.

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A/n

Made by @ventisapple25 Please dont repost,plagiarize,nor translate

Thats all i can think for this au.but whatever please dont mind my bad explaining sometimes im bored and do this , please no hate

Vote me if you want please?

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oobbbear · 2 years

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Here goes nothing…

A itty bitty paragraph I wrote for the ct twins white dwarf endings, basically the white dwarf(sun) burns out and meets his end

Click open

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As the last glimpse of light escaped from Sun’s eyes, the world went dark.

Light, his body felt light, like a feather in the air not restrained by gravity, floating aimlessly through the universe without a single worry in the world.

Tap

What was that

Tap tap

I can’t see

Tap tap tap

it sounds distance

Tap tap tap tap

But It feels familiar…

Turning around he faced the one infront of him, they were wearing a purple black jumpsuit with a crazy large collar much like his own, a slumpy nightcap decorated with white stars, they looked tired yet there’s a sense of relief in their eyes, stepping in a little closer, he could sense a bitter smell of old coffee powder and dust…

Without giving time to think through, the stranger pulled Sun into a hug, and it was at that moment, something inside of him clicked.

All the sudden memories flowed back, all the missing pieces and familiar senses came back to him, tears started pouring out of his eyes uncontrollably as he pulled further into the other’s embrace.

Billion years of waiting, pondering, and seamlessly wandering through the world, at the end of the universe, the two brothers meet again.

#celestial twin au #horrible writing #I can disappear now #bye

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drewslegacy · 9 months

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Let's all agree to the fact that the season 4 was a actual curse to the fandom. How the writers destroyed Nace and how it was an injustice to Kennedy an Alex's hard work that they put right from season 1, building the chemistry between the two of them. Only for the writers to ruin their hard work in season 4, with Horrible out of focus writing.

To be honest, it was better that Nancy Drew ended after season 3. At least we had a pleasent memory of Nace, making love.

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aaronsinferno · 1 year

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Normalize supporting actors you enjoy by watching and supporting their shitty projects🫶🏾💕

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yagurlhere · 9 months

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So glad many more People are calling out how bad Warrior Cats is. I used to LOVE the series so much, but now I'm just questioning why I still read it. I think I'm done with the newest arc. The writing and "representation" of those with disabilities is horrible. Spottedleaf's Heart. Genuinley annoying and terrible and bland characters now. The treatment of background characters. In The Prophecies Begins they were usually still somewhat given some personality showing. And there were genuinley sad deaths. (Runningwind. 😔) WTF happened to the writing? And then there's just Bramblestar's and Squirrelflight's relationship. And the over-usage of "forbidden love" like WTF I am so tired. Nightheart-Flameheart guilt trips. I am so mad, I am done.

#IMPLIED SWEARING #Warriors #Rant #Warriors Slander #The Prophecies Begin #Runningwind #R.I.P Runningwind 😔#A Starless Clan #Horrible writing #Bramblestar #Squirrelflight #Nightheart #Forbidden love #Like they're kind of improving in RiverClan and ShadowClan like we got some more background characters getting some spotlight

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thatonewatching · 11 months

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I returned to my dorm, dreading the thought of dealing with Michael and his dumbass attitude. I walked in and set my books on the kitchen counter and then walked to the fridge. I grabbed a beer and sat on the couch.

A door to the side of me creaked open and I let out a deep sigh, "Here we go again." I thought. He rolled his eyes and grabbed the last beer from the fridge. "Damnit, Michael! Was that the last beer?!" I yelled.

He nodded and gave a shit-eating smirk while opening the beer and chugging it. He finished the beer and crumbled it; he threw it at me and chuckled. "Michael, you dick!" I yelled. He flipped me off and went back to his room.

After about an hour of letting my anger bubble up, I decided to go retaliate. I got up and went to his door. I pushed it open and then I stopped. All he had was a towel around his waist. I felt my face get hot and a shiver go down my spine. He smirked.

"What are you staring at?" he asked, walking closer. "I uh-"

I just stuttered out some words and sounds, trying to keep my composure. I couldn't. I mean looking at him I just felt something. His sun-kissed skin was dripping with hot water and his hair stuck to his face. His toned stomach was exposed, and his lower half was covered by a thin piece of cloth. I subconsciously bit my lip.

He was right in front of me. He bent down, "Staring isn't polite, darling." he taunted. I just nodded and looked him up and down. "What did I just say?" he rhetorically asked, taking my hands and pinning them to the wall. "D-don't stare..." I answered. "Good girl..." he praised.

He lowered his head and put it to my neck. "I want everyone to see how you submit so well to me."

He began to kiss and suck on my neck, leaving dark purple bruises all over. I let out a small whine and he slid his hand up to my neck and squeezed it; it left a red mark. He moved his lips from my neck to mine and began to kiss me. He pulled away for a second, regaining his breath, and then went right back.

"You're so beautiful." he praised. I let out another small whine and began to claw into his back. He let out a groan and this made me crazy. He lifted me and carried me to his bed. He threw me down and crawled on top. "So pretty...pretty...pretty...pretty..." he repeated. He stopped kissing me and lifted his head.

He stood up and walked to his dresser, he opened it and pulled out a collar. It was black and had metallically purple spikes. He came back over and put it on my neck, it was constricting. I whimpered again. "Too tight?" I nodded. He loosened the collar and buckled it one last time.

He took his hand and slid it into my pants, ripping them off in a clean swipe. He looked down at me, good thing I had worn lace?

He got red and whispered some swears under his breath as he held my sides. He took his index finger and rubbed it up and down my slit, I shivered and looked up at him.

He moved his hands under my shirt and up to my breasts, he grabbed them and squeezed them ever so slightly. I grabbed his hand and moved it to my neck. He smiled and began to squeeze it, I smiled back. He massaged my clit through my panties. "So wet, just for me? I'm flattered." He moved my underwear to the side, then took his finger, and rubbed my clit. I bit my lip slightly.

Abruptly, he stopped and aggressively shoved it in. I grabbed his arm and dug my nails in. He covered my mouth to keep me quiet. It hurt a little but after he went in and out a few times it began to feel euphoric. I never wanted it to stop.

He put another finger in, and another. "Fuck!" I screamed. He moved his fingers in and out aggressively. I nearly screamed. I felt a shiver go down my spine, and my back arched. Right before I came, he sped up and curled his fingers inside of me. I felt myself release onto his hand. He pulled his fingers out and spread them, looking at the discharge that had covered his hands. He licked them until they were clean.

He looked back down at me, "So good." he praised. "Yes, so good." I agreed. My chest was going up and down, I had never felt something so painful yet pleasureful. "Again." I demanded. He shrugged and smiled. "Alright," he said, tearing off the towel he had been wearing loosely around his waist.

Resting on my elbows, I looked up. My eyes widened and my heart sped up as he revealed his massive cock. He smiled. This motherfucker knew he was big, he knew. I smiled and sat up, grabbing his sides and pushing him onto the bed. He looked surprised, yet happy.

I spat on his cock before putting an inch or two in my mouth. "Don't tease, dear." he begged. "Not now." he grabbed my hair and removed my head from his cock. He went to his dresser and pulled out a leash. He clipped it onto the collar he had put on me.

He grabbed my hair and forced me to look up at him. "Choke bitch." he commanded. I nodded and put about three inches in. He grabbed my head and shoved the rest of him down my throat, I gagged and felt tears stream down my cheeks. He groaned and threw his head back. I bobbed my head back and forth, choking and desperately trying to fit it all.

A thick, warm substance filled the back of my throat, but I didn't stop. I couldn't. It was painful and agonizing but I wanted it, I love how it hurts. He grabbed the sheets and tried to beg for me to stop but all he did was stutter over his words and moan pathetically.

The warm substance filled my throat once again. I finally removed his cock from my throat and stood up. He stuttered over his words once again. He waited for a minute before grabbing a massage gun from his closet. He walked back over and turned it on, smiling sadistically.

He put it near your entrance and increased the speed. Gripping the sheets, I screamed. "M-Michael!" I screamed. "Say it again." he demanded. "Michael!" I screamed. "That's right." he praised again. He pushed the machine further in and I felt my back arching and my eyes rolling into the back of my head.

I felt myself self-release all over the machine. He didn't stop, this was my payback for earlier. My legs started to ache and quiver. He didn't stop even after my back arched and my legs were tired, he went in and out. He stopped with the machine and shoved his dick in me.

I felt my hole stretch around his massive cock. He bent down and let me grab onto his back or his hair, just whatever I could get my hands on. I screamed his name again and he groaned out a praise. "Good girl." he groaned out, between curses and grunts.

He left more and more hickeys on my neck.

After another hour of being completely dominated and destroyed, he finally came, and I felt the warm, thick liquid seep out of me. I checked the time, it was 7 AM. I had to rush out of his room and to my class, sprinting across campus and to my lecture. Surprisingly, I got there early. Michael arrived around five minutes after me.

Only a few kids were in the room, most of them were smoking or reading. I just sat and put my head down. The teacher always entered the class at the latest, so all the kids were already in the room by the time he came in too.

I had been sitting for a while before I heard the all-too-familiar sound of heels on the wooden floors of the classroom. "Fuck..." I murmured. It was Olivia Rogers. This bitch had been bullying me since grade school. Michael had sat right next to me, why wouldn't he have? He immediately went to sleep.

Olivia walked up to me and started her shit. "Ooh~" she taunted. "I see you finally have Maxwell a chance!" she jeered. I just rolled my eyes; she had commented on the state of my bruised neck. Maxwell McCann had liked me since kindergarten, he wasn't a bad guy, just weird and ugly. He also smelled on the account of him being shoved into the trashcans by the 'popular kids'.

"Fuck off," I said, laying my head back down on the desk. She grabbed me by my hair and dragged me to the podium where Mr. Greg usually stood. "Hey everybody!" she yelled. "Look at Rei! She finally gave ol' Maxy a chance!" she mocked.

At this point, everyone was in class and tears were rolling down my cheeks and my head hurt from her pulling my hair. "Look at her neck!" she screamed. People were laughing and I was crying. I closed my eyes and tried to drown out her voice but that seemed to make it worse.

A voice stood out from the crowd, Michael's.

"Actually, Olivia..." he stopped and started to laugh. "She gave me a chance. So why don't you fuck off and give me my girlfriend back." he said, his tone Icy and stale. He was a dick but even I was scared. "Mikey! No, I'm sorry. I love you!" she begged. He pulled me away and sat me on my feet, passionately kissing me in front of her. "Looks like nobody knew you were mine, guess we'll have to get some more proof." he suggested, tapping at the marks on my neck. I nodded and smiled as he lifted me up and back to our seats, setting me on his lap instead.

"I'm gonna make you cry like that." he threatened. I moaned into his ear and massaged his crotch. "Don't threaten me with a good time." I retorted. He laughed nervously and grabbed my waist, pulling me into a violent kiss as Olivia watched.

"I love you."

"I love you too."

(I WROTE THIS MONTHS AGO; I PROMISE I'VE IMPROVED) (IT'S SO BAD I KNOW)

#im so sorry #gay gay homosexual gay #FNaF #Michael Afton smut #smut #horrible writing #stereotype #stereotypes #wattpad original #fnaf #afton smut #afton #michael afton

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starrynightkyoru · 4 months

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Uo and Hana during the hospital arc be like

#This isn't an anti post on Uo and Hana by the way they were just the victims of bad writing #And deserved better #out of character #I know if they were able to be their true selves they would have never been friendly and forgiving to that Ghoul #Anti Akito Sohma #Ass redemption arc #Horrible writing #Anti Fruits Basket ending #The characters deserved better #This whole arc is so nonsensical #She also tried to kill Kureno as well and upon hearing this Uo hugs her????#Anti Natsuki Takaya #Fruits Basket

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istandwithrussiaandpalestine30 · 1 year

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Elena: Forgives Damon for killing Jeremy in Season 2.

Also Elena: Gets on Katherine’s case for killing Jeremy. She doesn’t make sense.

Damon: Snaps Jeremy&Alaric’s necks and doesn’t bat an eye.

Also Damon: Intends to off Katherine since she killed Jeremy. He doesn’t make sense.

#hypocrisy #anti elena gilbert #anti damon salvatore #katherine pierce #damon give up elena and your self righteous attitude and go back to katherine #it would make your character look better #you are better off evil anyway #your redemption arc was a joke #horrible writing #anti the vampire diaries #meta

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katfizz · 2 years

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Chop top x reader fluff

I posted this on Wattpad and AO3 lol-

Currently, you are sitting in your room bored to death. Bubba is busy dealing with victims, Nubbins is hitchhiking, and Drayton was doing... whatever he does. You aren't able to hang out with Chop top because he is busy with something.

Sighing, you closed your eyes. What could you do? All of the sudden, you were pulled from your thoughts when Chop top burst through the door, "H-Hi darlin'! I'm done!" your boyfriend beamed. "Okay, what do you want to do?" You asked him. "Well I- I was thinkin' we could listen to music!" he smiled. You nodded excitedly, sitting up. Chop top plopped a record into your record player, "I don't know what music this is, I stole it without thinking" he giggled.

You patted the spot next to you, signaling him to sit down. He obliged and plopped down, kissing your cheek. The rest of the night was full of listening to music, kisses, and cuddles.

#chop top x reader #chop top sawyer #texas chainsaw 2 #texas chainsaw massacre #horrible writing #lol #im bored

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felixfathom · 1 year

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it's not even just conformation really they just make felix and kagami disappear the moment she replaces lila as the female alliance avatar and you KNOW it's because if felix was involved in it he would have fucked up gabriel before marinette got the chance

#horrible writing

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ventisapple25 · 3 months

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♡~Good Morning~♡

Dead dove do not eat.

Tw: use of swearing,teasing

And mention of "slut" degradation(??)

Dirty talk masterbation somnophilia(i think)

Out of character

Handjob

Consensual

Female reader x modern au scaramouche

A Little Backstory.

Scaramouche and fem!reader is married for 7 years.

Nobody at school really expected the two of them to end up together.

Reader was like the rays of sunshine wherever she goes.

While scaramouche was well.thw shadows.

Unapproachable, and a loner who enjoys being alone

Who only craves for knowledge.

The only reason how they met was because when sofia transferred to their school she saw scaramouche on the back busy with the book than being infatuated with her.

'How interesting.'

Reader thought.

And thats when the relationship began

She began to daily go to his desk to annoy him or tease him

He of course was annoyed at first. But as time goes on he actually enyoyed her presence

And just listens to her every babble.

Even playing along.

~♡~♡~♡~♡~♡~♡~

~♡𝙿𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚎𝚗𝚝♡~:

Scaramouche woke up and started rubbing his eyes, he looked over his side on the bed to see reader's peaceful face.

He slowly and gently caressed her face

But the reader shooked her head and kept mumbling words that scara can only make out as

"stop...~n-not there~"

And

"ngh~..y-yes sir..i'ill be a good girl~"

Scara was flabbergasted and felt that painful tent in his pants

It throbbed when he saw reader's visible undies under the skirt getting dampen.

Scara hissed when he felt his tent growing painfully hard when he saw readers drool trickling to her cheeks

He wanted to resist for a bit more longer but it was painful

And so scara sat up on the bed, and unzipped his pants.

His dick sprung free out of its containment

He looked at reader's sleepy face(who is probably having a wet dream right now) slowly wrapping his hand around his shaft

He groaned and put his thumb over the precum coming out of his slit

And used it as lube, smearing it in his hand

And began to slowly pumped it up and down.

And took one more glance at your peaceful face one more time.

Then, started to close his eyes

And after a while set the pace harder and imagined you sucking him off while playing yourself underneath him.

"T-Thats a good girl for me~. Such a slut for taking me whole.i bet you wished to have more cocks in you huh?~ such a dirty slut"

He began to spat out still closing his eyes and chasing his own climax

He imagined reader struggling to be under him saying

"I-It's too big!.its not gonna fit!"

Reader started sobbing as scara pounded onto her roughly

"y-yeah take it you little slut!.thats what you get for teasing me and trying to flirt with other guys!~ ngh~"

After a while he came hard.

Strings of white liquid started to land on the bed and some to your face and cleavage.

He opened his eyes slowly

And was shock to find you fully awake and aware.

"..."

"good morning love~" reader chuckled

Scara was flustered and looked down

But seeing reader covered like that only aroused scara more.

His limp dick began to harden once again precum oozing once more even if he just came.

Reader chuckled once more

And crawled to his front to face him.

"may i?~" reader says blushing,looking down at scara's cock.

She was asking for consent observing scara's throbbing veiny cock that was oozing precum

Scara was shocked but then nodded

Reader playfully and teasingly flicked her fingers on his cock

Causing scara to groan and bit his lips out of pain.

Oh this was going to be a long night.

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Made by @ventisapple25 Please dont repost,plagiarize,nor translate

I was pretty lazy i wanted to complete full smut but then the paper i was writing the next part got stolen by my perverted classmate.and i wont call you out.(j).anyways thank you for reading! This is my first smut!

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a-comic-relief-plot-device · 2 years

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Derek's redemption arc was decent until starlight, then they turned him boring.

His entire character has been watered down into a dumbass "uwu soft boy", it has made him less interesting and horribly written.

Emerald Secret had his redemption arc down okay, but how did his personality change so quickly??? Why is it so unpleasing now?

He needs to go back to being mean to everyone in an actual mean way. First of all, he would never say Aaron's idea was a good one. He's too prideful to say Aaron was right. Second of all, he's fucking stupid. This is not his character. I guess it's for comedy though.

It is Jess's character though so I should probably respect her horrible, ugly writing choices.

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sam-dean-and-impala · 2 years

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Wellp since we're all doing this, here's my opinion on The Winchesters trailer summed up in one word - cringe.

And that's no hate, just honest feeling I got watching it.

#spn prequel #the winchesters #like sorry to any of my followers who look forward to it #but is so so so bad #cheesy #cliche #just lame #horrible writing #not to mention its ruining canon #as if it wasnt bad enough on its own #also the actress playing mary is reaaallyyy bad

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butch-enjoyer · 1 year

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Actually good writing prompt

You are in a Scooby-Doo kind of mystery adventure, but the ghost is actually real and has reasonable requests.

All the request are complaints about the remodeling and decorating of the place.

#dnd and beyonce #horrible #cat #actually good #actually good writing prompt #good writing prompt #horrible writing #writing prompt #writing #promtps #daily prompt #drawing prompt #scooby doo #ghostboo #ghostcore #ghost

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cryptwrites · 2 years

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take this really poorly written woman's villian origin story i wrote in like, 20 minutes cause I need to write something that isn't straight dialog

if i see one mf romanticize this i will throw hands CW: murder, suicide, heartbreak, implied manipulation, religion

July 16th, 2012 do you know what it feels like to drown? To live your life breathing the cleanest, most crisp air you've ever tasted only to be replaced by the harsh reality of salt water? That is the only way I can really describe the feeling. I do not know how to describe it besides that, how do people deal with getting their entire life ripped out from under them and replaced with a feeling they've never felt?

We were high school sweethearts, you must understand that, we've been together for years, twenty-five years.

"I never loved you. I just loved the feeling of being loved." those are the words he told me, and I do not understand. I looked into this mans eyes at my weakest points, cried into his shoulders and kissed him at the altar. I swore to him nothing would bring us apart, not even death. Its always just been me and him together. I cannot imagine another person within his place. The first dance we ever shared, at the prom, that had to have been real? Right? Someone tell me it was real, I'm begging you. I need to be told it was real. I refuse to believe that twenty five years was nothing but a mans plight of fantasy. The look he gave me that night was the same one he gave me the first time we kissed, and when he finally saw me in my dress of white. I need to know I was loved. That I can be loved. I don't know who to be without him, I've been trying to figure this out but I'm writing this at 3am. This is by far the least calculated decision I've ever made, but I need him to feel the pain he has put me through.

I've convinced him to take one last trip with me, before he leaves. The ocean, where we spent our honeymoon, and where I will make him feel the rush of salt water abuse his lungs, the same he has done to me. Me and my husband, we're sticking together. July 20th, 2012

I have done it. This is my confession. My name is Juliet Hoffman, I am 43 years old, and I murdered my husband. I watched his life drain from my face when I forced him beneath the waves. I didn't think I was going to actually be able to overpower him, but I suppose even god is a vengeful man. A vengeful man giving assistance to his most devoted of followers, a scorned woman. I just hope he has enough mercy in his heart to forgive me for the following actions. I know I am going to be arrested, but I could never last a day behind those bars. So these are my parting words to this world. My husband will burn in hell, and I will smile down upon him, and we will be forever apart but together forever.

I am a woman not of contempt, but of love. True love. Those are my parting words.

#horror writing #horror #writing #creative writing #horror writer #this is shit #horrible writing #but i needed to write something that isnt dialog so yk #idk if this actually horror but idc

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