#story progress

[qulrikkek]

I think we don't talk about this scene enough, so let's dive in:

Earlier episode 5 establishes that Din and Bo had grown closer to each other, while staying at the Covert:

There's plenty of space so there's no need to sit so close to each other unless they've grown closer.

Now back to this scene where the Armorer asks Bo to remove her helmet.

She was hesitant, and we rarely see Bo being hesitant about anything.

Now ask yourself why? Why was she so hesitant here?

Why wouldn't she want to get rid of her helmet? Not so long ago, she called Din's tribe a cult because of keeping their helmets on.

So what changed?

She lost her home. Din offered shelter. Then she *accidentally* joined his cult.

It's not indicated anywhere how much time passes between episode 3 and 5, but I would say at least a few weeks, if not a couple of months.

So why wouldn't she be relieved to receive the chance of removing her helmet?

You could say, well because she would become an apostate in the other's eyes, and therefore would be thrown out of the Tribe.

But, the Armorer refutes that by explaining "Bo Katan is walking both worlds."

But she is not concerned with the others, at least not at first. Her whole attention is hanging on Din's reaction.

She's afraid of losing his respect, and his friendship they had forged during their time together in the Covert up until this point.

She seems to want to say something in her own defence, but can't, because there's nothing. Instead, she's pleading with her eyes. (Katee's acting here is phenomenal)

This moment is about whether or not Din will reject her for taking off the helmet, like her Nite Owls rejected her for not getting the Dark saber.

And we know, that he not only doesn't reject her, (like he did in the past at their first meeting), but he joins to help her seek out her fleet.

From this point on, Bo is looking for his approval, and support.

Continuously!

It's so intriguing to watch how much she comes to rely on Din.

Then the pledge scene:

She's completely taken off guard.

She didn't expect him to support her after revealing how she surrendered, which inevitably led to the Night of a Thousand Tears.

This time Din goes beyond the simple nod of support by pledging his undying loyalty.

This marks another turning point in their relationship.

*Don't even try to tell me this isn't romantic as hell!!!*

It's clear where their relationship is heading.

She even says it:

Gif credit to: @enidsinclair

#din djarin #dinbo #bodin #bo katan #the mandalorian #the mandalorian season 3 #star wars #bo katan kryze #din x bo #radom #anaylsis #scene analysis #looks like a established relationship to me #character growth #good acting #story progress

[robedruby]

Does anyone have any tips concerning writing?

Like, does anyone have a writing 101 for someone who knows nothing other than their own ideas in their brain.

#writerscommunity #writer things #writers on tumblr #writing #writing fanfic #writing for myself #writing for fun #faq #worldbuilding #characterization #story building #story progress

[silverpoints-terminal]

What is the Entity?

>> Kip O. Silverpoint has established a connection with portable device R81216

Alright. I'm... really not sure what else I could do.

I hope there is a good explanation to all of this.

>> The signals have been redirected to the portable unit and will not execute on the lab terminal. Proceed?

Yes.

Cedric, Prophetbot... Is this better?

#status update #as kip #blanket cw for #unreality #cw unreality #cedric #prototype #entity #the world machine #story progress #oneshot game #///ooc: hop in we are giving a local scientist an existential crisis bigger than the one she was having before #///ooc: also may have to make a local wm confront its sense of self #os game rp

[smok3inm1rrors]

Happy New Year! Sort of, I'm a few days a week+ late. Story stuff below.

I've been writing in the background. My original plan was to drop it without any notice on new years... Yeah, you can see how that went. The starting sequence has been such a pain in the ass that I've fully written and almost finished shooting the next four scenes. Despite it being a pain in the ass, I've had fun working on it, which is more than I can say about my previous attempt.

I decided to go back to one of my earlier ideas that I never (really) showed on tumblr which is Cassandra, Caleb, and Morgyn as the lead characters that navigate their respctive "factions" during a conflict. The factions being "rich people" (for lack of a better word), vampires, and witches. The conflict is murder.

Hence this previous tagline that I pulled out of my ass back in July.

It's where that one was originally going to go (if you remember this murder was going to happen at said party), but it never got there.

This will come out...sometime. Don't want to put a date on it just yet as there are still a couple of things that need worked on. Some trivial, such as the entire voice over that ties all of these characters together in the first two posts. Others are more important... like Lilith somehow having an iPhone 11 in 2016. (/s)

I was just going to convert something from CGTrader originally, but between drowning in polygons and the decimate modifer creating unimaginable horrors, I finally said "Fuck it, I'll do it myself". It's rather crunchy- deep fried iPhone 5s if you will. However it's only 1.3k poly so I will take it.

#nonsense #story progress #“”holly“” #that's emilia #shh #and yes the vatores are back being unfortunate human college grads rather than centuries old vampires

[severecoffeekoala]

Reminiscing on the "first date" with Prince Keith! 💕🦌💕

Rose (MC) was dressed up for this occasion.

Right from the start these simpletons (besides Wicked Keith) made their feelings very obvious.

#ikemen prince #ikemen series #ikepri #keith howell #ikepri keith #first date #story progress #otome game

[stellyxan]

A funny art based on my Countryhumans story called Haunted by past family mistakes. A story that takes place in a summer between 2025 and 2030 revolving Serbia and some revenge plans by someone. The first chapter is already out and the second is almost done. Link in the comment section

#art #digitalart #artist #countryhumans #story progress #serbia #austria hungary #countryhumans story

[ask-maize-spirit]

Maize: You seem distressed...

(Maize places a hand on George's shoulder. George shivers.)

George: I don't know about any of this. I am so lost and it will be a disaster if I don't know what to do.

George: (pacing) I was busy doing... work I think. I should be in the archive room. I had some manuscripts to publish for next week and-

Maize: Is that the last thing you remember?

George: I... think so... that's not wrong right? I may have... fallen asleep? Maybe this is just a nightmare. Oh, I don't want to upset you, I don't know if you tell people they're in a nightmare or...

Maize: Miss... listen to me. You're not saying anything wrong... No...

Maize: I think we both have per... Well. (Maize pauses, hesitant) I cannot say for certain what brought us here. But together perhaps we could figure something out.

Maize: What say you about using looking through this computer? It looks like our only option, for the moment.

Maize: My abilities are limited. I never used one before, after all.

Maize: Please, I will be by your side. You will be fine.

George: I can try... (George looks up at Maize, stunned as she finally noticed the plant spirit's face.) .Are you... our god?

Maize: No... not at all.

Maize: Merely a withered guardian.

George: Oh... I will help.

George: Where... should I start?

///ooc notes below the cut

///ooc: alright folks! what do you say we do a little bit of interactive fiction? Feel free to give them prompts, or ask them any questions you have. There are answers out there and I'm gonna help you reach them *wink*

#as maize #os game rp #story progress #as george iii #oneshot game

[prophet-of-the-barrens]

If you're thinking about things too much, maybe it would be best to talk with someone about it...

[Tell me, then.]

[How do you think that just went with George?]

[Because good is not the word I would use.]

#ask #anonymous #as prototype #story progress #//boy the salt. keep at it

[askthediscordedcrusaders]

“R-R-Rainbow Dash! Wait—!”

“BUZZ OFF, KID!”

Scootaloo ran after Dash, trying to keep up. Sadly for her, her former hero wasn’t having any of it. She didn’t care.

In a great escape attempt, Rainbow flew away; knowing Scootaloo couldn’t fly.

“. . . Crud.”

#guest ; rainbow dash #muse ; scootaloo #ic #story progress

[justlookingformyfavships]

Well was almost finished with the chapter. The way I write on AO3 is I keep the page open for days. Somehow the entire chapter was deleted. My fault I should have saved a draft. Luckily some of it I did save just gonna take a bit to get to where I was.

#mistakes #kurameshi #story progress #im a dumbass #sorry #im cryin

[typewritersandtentacles]

The door to my office abruptly slammed open and Leuce snapped, “Put your fucking dick away, you’re as bad as Dio.”

I opened my eyes, my orgasm faltering immediately. Fuck. I glared across the room at Leuce, who matched irritation with her own challenging stare. She clutched a small white dog I’d never seen before, which looked more like a cloud than an actual pet.

Leon? It was a hesitant inquiry, her thoughts breathless.

You did beautifully darling, but I have to go, I’m sorry. Someone just came into my office, but I promise to tend to you when I return. I tucked my semi-hard cock back into my pants, glaring across the room at Leuce. “You could have knocked,” I growled.

Oh, uh… okay. Another flash of embarrassment. Shit, that wasn’t my intent. I would apologize to her properly when I got back.

I will see you soon darling, I promise.

Sophronia sheepishly peeked around Leuce. “I’m sorry sir, I tried to stop her, but—”

Leuce waved her off. “You asked to see me, remember?”

“It’s okay,” I said and sighed, redoing my belt buckle. “That’ll be all Sophronia.”

She closed the door, leaving me with Leuce.

“I hope you’re happy with yourself,” I grumbled. I’d been so close to release, riding on the curtails of Astraea’s climax. Now I’d have to wait until I could see her again.

“Not a day in my life,” she said and walked over to the two chairs in front of my desk, draping herself in one. She settled the dog in her lap, who morosely laid down. “So were you just rubbing one out or are things with Serena going well?”

#writing #writing tips #writing community #wattpad update #wattpad #wattpad writing #wattpadwriting #monster romance #monster fucker #monster lover #monster smut #smut #new adult fiction #new adult #new adult romance #new adult fantasy #modern fantasy #story progress #story update #new adult story #my story #writer life #female writers

[loulouflowerpower]

Story Update/Status (9/3/2023)

(I started uni...I hate group projects).

Doctor Who (The Hatter): Begin Again: Chapter 5, Robot of Sherwood, Part 1. Word count, 6,251. Last worked on 9/3/2023.

Time and Space (One-Shot series):   Pending time to write/motivation/inspiration.

The Doctor and The Hatter, When It All Started (Companion series): Pending time to write/motivation/inspiration.

Doctor Who (The Envoy): Main Story, Story 2: Title yet to be announced. Chapter 4, To be announced. Word count 2,249. Last worked on 29/12/2022.

Sherlock (Amelia Wilson): Hidden Truths (Main series): The Final Problem, Part 4. Word count 3,246. Last worked on 22/2/2023.

Missing Pieces (One-Shot series): Chapter 11, The Aluminum Crutch, Part 3. Word count, 296. Last worked on 12/11/2022.

Harry Potter (Theodora Earl): Story 3, Title yet to be announced. Chapter 14. Word count 17,361, as of 17/2/2023.

True Blood (Lucy Ellis): Story 1, Title yet to be announced, Chapter 14. Word count 4,395, last worked on 25/11/2022.

Wednesday 2022: Woeful Foresight, Chapter 9, Woe is the Loneliest Number, Part 1. Word Count, 4,792. Last worked on 3/3/2023.

#fanfiction #doctor who #sherlock bbc #harry potter #wednesday #the hatter #Amelia Wilson #Theodora Earl #wednsday addams #The Envoy #Lucy Ellis #story update #my ocs #archive of our own #story progress

[silverpoints-terminal]

A New Chance

(Kip breathes through the mask, seeing the residential buildings in the distance. A large robot is sitting, while someone else stands beside them. Kip recognizes the standing robot immediately.)

Silver!

[You're here.]

[Hello, Ms. Silverpoint.]

[I was notified by the Guardian of your arrival. They insisted that I should wait for you here.]

Oh... we could go back to your place too, if you... prefer. I wanted to talk to you.

I want to... goodness it's a lot. Do you have a moment?

[I've been working on mending the Guardian for hours. It's kept me busy.]

[Their arm needs to be reattached, their joints are hard to move... I am doing what I can with my knowledge, but I am not familiar with this model.]

[I don't think this is what you came to listen to, anyway. This is just me responding to the repair requests around the area.]

[What brings you here? What's the point?]

(Kip breathes in, taking off her gas mask, and placing her goggles back on, as is her habit.)

Sorry, I had to do that first.

Well you... I wanted to check on you.

You never answered my letters. And I gave up sending them eventually but I thought... well. I thought there had to be a good reason.

And now with the sun back too—

[I believe sending updates to the Refuge on the state of the Barrens is all that was needed.]

[You DID send me here. I may as well do the job, shouldn't I?]

[I don't think I need to explain that the Sun is back, you can see that. The robots are active, but I don't have much else to give them other than clean up the outpost and assess the earthquake damage.]

No... Yeah I know you send those updates. They're helpful.

But this is different. It's... it's not just about that. Well, it is a bit about that because the other scientist's think this whole thing is pointless and—

[This whole thing? I assume you mean this area's operations?]

[My assessment of it is that there are zones that are inaccessible because of the recent earthquakes, and most communication terminals seem to be broken.]

[I don't know whether you are in need of materials from the Barrens, but otherwise I don't see why bother with it.]

Ah... well, that answers that.

How... bad were the earthquakes? We had to evacuate the lab complex.

[The mines are fully inaccessible. Even more so than it was the last time I reported on it.]

[...]

[I am inclined to believe they weren't earthquakes. At least not as we commonly know them.]

[I do not have a lot of data to analyze, however. This is just my experience.]

That... sounds like an interesting theory to consider. It's not the point, sorry.

Why? Where were you when it happened?

[That's not important.]

[The seismic movements stopped, and there are no reliable ways to predict them with anything I could give you.]

[You... mentioned the letters you sent.]

[Anything to add on that topic?]

#as kip #as silver #a new chance #os game rp #story progress #the barrens #kip touches grass arc #oh this will be a #long post #probably a #really long post #///ooc note: you can still send asks all you want #this main thread will show the story as it goes.

[poke-entomology]

Skyla: So, did I pass the safety inspection?

Skeeter: *in full body cast* ...No.

#gym badge got! #story progress #most dangerous gym in the region hands down

[stil-lindigo]

Ahmed Saad or @/90-ghost's brother in law is currently doing his best to organise the evacuation of his family from Gaza. This family suffers from a combination of ailments that all require medical attention. This is the description on their GFM page:

Hello, I hope you all are doing well!

My name is Mohamed Monir Ahmad Mahmoud, I’m a hemophilia patient from Gaza. I decided to start this campaign with all the hope that you could support me in evacuating Gaza to do surgery for me and my daughter and start a fresh life with my 5 kids out of the ongoing genocide in Gaza [...] I was supposed to go out at the end of 2023 to have surgery on my knees but since 7 October, I had no chance due to the procedures on Rafah crossing, the gate of Gazans to the world. Now, my knees and elbows are bleeding with no access to any type of care and if things stand as they are in Gaza, I won’t be able to walk or make any effort because of the bleeding (currently I am barely able to set up a small fire in front of the tent to prepare food for my kids).

What I ask is 60,000, for travel costs because each one would need to pay 5,000-8,000$ to be allowed to leave Gaza through Rafah crossing and we need around 3000$ more in Egypt for our stay and to obtain visas. We will be heading to Brazil where my brother Diaa lives and there is a huge chance to do the surgeries and access health care as the health care for Hemophilia patients in Brazil is one of the most advanced in the world.

please give generously!!

#theyre only at a fraction through their progress #after ahmed's success story getting his money #i hope tumblr can muster up enough generosity to help these folks out too #palestine #free palestine #free rafah #free gaza #rafah #mutual aid #donations

[becomingthevlillainsfamily]

A typical horror story's beginning

Everyone scattered inside the cold, gigantic, palace like toy shop except me, I was standing outside at a safe distance from the main door despite my friend's constant requests and orders to come inside. "Why am I even here?" I glanced down at my watch and then at the wide open door, which creaked everytime a strong breeze blew. I hate ghosts, horror movies and people who are not afraid from either of them, because they force me to feel as if I am some kind of cry baby hiding and being scared of things which don't even exist. I grabbed the door's handle and plunged my head inside the toy shop, if you could call it one, I still refused to accept that this house was a toy shop not some rich man's mansion which he had forgotten about. It was dark inside except the warm sunlight which barely lit up the house inside. A torch suddenly flashed up on my face, I crept back shielding my eyes with my hands, as the door closed shut with a loud noise on my face. "Woah, that's cliché" an exasperated voice exhaled from my mouth. "Hey what are you exactly doing outside?" an enraged voice popped up from inside, "Standing, of course!?"I raised my eyebrows and rolled my eyes annoyingly "Anyways you didn't have to slam the door like that" with that I pulled myself backwards leaning on the railing waiting for a response but no voice came put from inside or any sign of opening the door, for some reason I didn't know why I felt for the first time that I had gotten myself into something I was going to regret for the rest of my life.

#oc #my characters #horror #ghost #short story #story prompt #short horror stories #mod post #fairground #writing #My Story #story progress #story project #female protagonist