#re write

[yandere-mha-blog]

Part one

Word count:2266

Well, i know i have been gone for a while, but hey that's life for you. anyway I know some people will be upset I'm just re-writing an story, but hey i like to think my skills and plot devolpment skills have gotten better.

also I'm doing this for fun :3, but ye the story is gonna be a re write, something will be the same and other things will be different, I hope the peeps that have been following this blog for a while will enjoy the re write and see what has changed.

and for those who are new enjoy :D

with out further a do here is part one re written owo

You were thankful the school day was almost over, another numb day. You looked out the window. Seeing a red crested cardinal bird in a tree cleaning its wings, you stared at it while the teacher droned on about another homework assignment.

Till he slammed a large book down on your desk, you jolted and the bird flew off.

“Care to pay attention (name).” he  asked, the whole classed snickered

“I was listening, you said our essay about what college we wish to attend is due tomorrow.” you said, he seemed to bite his tongue

“Good.” he said and walked back up the front of the class

“Now everyone I know you are tired of me saying this, but this is a very important assignment. I want you all to think about your future, and don't look out the windows.”

“Whata prick, he must get off to bullying students.” you thought as you continued to tap your pencil on the piece of paper, truth be told you already knew what college would be best, just to get a start on a literature degree, although you knew that 98 percent of your classmates would end up as a sales representative in some corporate scheme. You were hoping to be in the 2 percent that didn't try to drink themselves to death every night.

Still you still had to help clean the classroom, you went to the closet and pulled the broom and dustpan out and made your way back to the classroom, only to see your desk was missing, and so were your classmates.

You dropped the broom and dustpan on the floor, you walked over to the open window and looked down,and there was your desk and chair on the ground, at least your class wasn't on the third floor, then it would be broken.

You sighed as you grabbed the trash bin and made your way to the incinerator, you tossed the trash in and slammed the thing shut, you sat down on the floor and looked up, still so gloomy, but there was that bird you saw early fly by, well maybe not the same bird, but same species.

Maybe you should just leave your desk outside and not clean the classroom, but you were sure your classmates would find a way to spin the blame on you, you hated them, what you really wanted was for them to just leave you the fuck alone.

You felt a hot tear run down your cheek as you whipped it away, no you weren't going to cry over a bunch of immature assholes bullying you.

Then the smell of smoke hit your nose, ugh it smelt like the patio where you dad would smoke before he quite, you let out a cough, man you couldn't stand the smell of it

“Who the fuck is there?” someone yelled, you flinched, why couldn't you just keep it in. you heard foots stomp over to you, you got up off the ground. And came face to, well chest with the guy.

“Oh just a girl…thought you were a teacher.” he said before taking another drag from his cigarette. “But you're not a snitch are you?”

He blew a puff of smoke in your face, and you started coughing again

“NO, wheeze, I don't care what you do.” you said “I just came here to throw the trash away.”

“...you are skipping out on cleaning duties aren't you?” he said as he dropped the ciggreete and stomped it out with his shoe.

“No.” you said

“Yes you are, otherwise you would be back ,doing your little maid work.” he said

“Okay fine maybe I am, so what?” you said

“Oh she talks.” he said before pulling a cigarette out of his coat pocket “well now you can't report me, want one?”

“No thanks.” you said 

“Come on it looks like to me at least that you need one, you looked stressed.” he said

“No I'm not.” you retorted, honestly you should of just of left, but he wouldn't stop talking

“Then why are skipping cleaning duty, you seem like the type who is a bit straight laced.” he said

“I ... .my classmates tossed my desk and chair out the window when I went to get a broom, and then ditched me.”

“Ah so they have been harassing you?” He asked 

“Classic case of it.” you said, as you slumped on the wall

“Why don't you just slam there faces on the pavement and tell them not to fucking mess with you.” he said, you were taken back a bit, that was a tad bit villent since he said it with a 100 percent serious voice.

“That wouldn't work.” you said as you looked away

“You are kind of a downer, aren't you?” he said

“Suppose I am.” you said

“...what class are you in anyways?” he asked

“2-B.” you said “why?”

“Because the teacher usually comes by here in like 10 minutes to smoke.” He said “so i would just head home.”

“But my desk and the cleaning still need to be done.”

“Listen to me when i say, leave it be.” he said

“...i think i will, thanks…”

“Just call me Dabi.” he said

“Thansk dabi, for listening to me.” you said “i think i'll take your advice.”

He let out a small chuckle “you better...i didn't get your name you know”

“You can call me (name).” you said

You went home and were greeted with your mom who was cooking dinner.

“Oh honey you are home early,...you okay?”

“Hm?” you said snapping out of your thought “im fine, i think i just want to lay down for a bit.” “Okay , dinner will be ready in thirty.” she said as you went to your room and laid down on your bed, rolling yourself in a blanket, you didn't really have an appetite, you knew your teacher would just chew you out tomorrow for not cleaning the classroom, since you knew he would believe your classmates over you.

You picked at your dinner, your father looked at you.

“What's wrong (name) you barely touched your food.” he said

“Sorry, it looks delicious mom, but i'm not feeling hungry, i haven't really had an appetite.” you said

“Hmm, you must be getting sick.” she said as she put a hand to your forehead “well i am not risking it, let's get you a nice cup of water and some rest.”

“Mom,really i'm fine-”

“Nope, off to bed with you.” she said, you decided there was no use disagreeing with her.

You laid down in your bed as your mom set a glass of water on your night stand.

“Mom, I'm not a little kid.”

“Yes but you will always be my child.” she said and placed a kiss on your forehead “now get some rest, i'll call the school in the morning.”

“Mom, really it's fine.” you said

“Nope, night sweetie.” she said turning the light off and closing the door, you sighed and grabbed your phone, you opened your notes app and wrote down

“Mom is worried about me again, letting me miss school tomorrow. I bet those jerks in my class will think i did not show up because of them, i don't like them to know what they do gets under my skin. I can't wait to graduate and be done with this place.”

You placed your phone down and grabbed your book, might as well get some light reading done before.

Dabi was at his usual smoking spot, when his eyes glanced over to a desk chair that was still outside, he looked up and saw a bunch of kids still laughing and pointing at it.

“You think she ran home crying?”

“Haha probably, man wish i could have seen her.”

“I know right, man she is just so pretentious she just has one of those faces.”

“I know what you mean.”

Dabi rolled his eyes at there comments, it was the end of the school day and your chair was still outside, meaning the teacher 

Didn't notice it was missing

Told the kids to get it but didn't enforce it

Also found it funny

Maybe it was time he shake things up a bit, he tosses hs cigarette into a trash can and went inside the school, up the second floor

“Class B, class B.” he mumbled to himself before standing outside the doorway, and slamming the door open.

The kids jumped at the sudden noise and all eyes were on him. 

“You need something?” one of the kids in the middle said

“Which one of you tossed the desk out the window?” Dabi asked, it was silent “i said which one of you threw the desk out the fucking window!

He slammed his fist on the wall, the girls huddled behind the guy, dabi loved seeing the faces of people scared of him.

“Hey man we didn't do anything like that-” “Bullshit, i was outside and heared your comments, you tossed the desk out the window.” he said “And i fucking hate liars.”

“Look we-”

“Shut up.” Dabi said “Now whose idea was it to toss the window out the door, and who is the one who pushed it out?”

“It was his idea.” A girl said and pointed to the ring leader “and he pushed it out the window.”

“See, that was so hard.” Dabi said as he walked over and grabbed there shoulders “everyone else get the fuck out.”

“Hey man look we are sorry-”

“You nearly crushed my damn head with a desk chair.” He said 

“We didn't mean to hit you, it was a prank on our classmate.”

“Oh right, I met her. You know, a nice girl had a chat with her.” Dabi said and gave him a smile, the guy gulped, ”now how about you two see what it's like to be pushed out a window.”

“Wait!’ the guys both yelled before Dabi shoved them out the window, everyone else screamed and looked down

“Oh my god, get the nurse!” The girl who snitch on the two of them yelled

“Oh don't act so shocked, you knew what would happen to them, you put the blame on them so you wouldn't get in trouble.” Dabi said heading towards the door “also if i hear anything about your little group messing with her..well I think you already have an idea of what i will do.”

You went to school the next day, you felt a little better than yesterday. Your mom was right, you needed yesterday off. It was fine all things considered, you read a bunch, finished your homework assignment and even went to the park with your mom to feed the ducks. But it was back to the same old harassment and bullshit.

You felt more eyes on you that day, when you looked at them, they quickly snapped their head in front of them. You obviously saw them, was this another prank by them.

You didn't even notice two classmates were missing, besides it was lunch time.

You ate in your unusual hiding spot far, far away from people. At least you hoped so

“Hiding from your classmates?” A familiar voice said, you looked up and there was Dabi in all his messy uniform glory.

“I just wanted some alone time, so yes.” you said “but also no.”

“I see.” he said and leaned on the wall next to you “Any of them giving you issues?”

“No…well actually, they have been staring at me, then when I look back they snap their heads away, it might be some weird psychological torment, who knows.”

“Hm, it's probs because i sent your classmates a little message.” he said pulling a cigarette out

“You did what?” you asked

“Well, you won't get mad will you?’ He teased “I pushed two guys out the window.”

“YOU DID WHAT?” You yelled “why, why would you do that, are they okay?”

“Does it matter?’ he asked

“Yes, you could be expelled, or-”

“Pfffttt, hahah , no that won't happen.” he said “Are you worried about me.”

“Why would you, are they okay?”

“I mean one broke an arm, and the other a couple ribs, they'll live.” he said

“I…why would you.” you said

“I saw your dead eyes.” he said “I know those types of people, they don't stop until one of them gets hurt.”

“ That's true.” you said and sighed “Still…isn't that a little excessive, what if you get expelled, or they file a report against you.”

“My dad paid them off already.” Dabi said “perks of having a  deadbeat dad who will pay off any incidents you have.”

“You are crazy.” you said “but…thanks.”

“Oh?” he said “so you aren't mad at me?”

“I mean, a little excessive, but if it gets my classmates off my back, then it needs to be done, although…I kind of wish I pushed them out the window.” You said

“See that's the spirit.” he said and bumped your shoulder with his “Look if those assholes give you any issue, let me know.”

“Why do you care?” you asked “Why would you go out of your way like that.”

“Hm, probably because I think you're cute.” he said “well (name), i'll see you around.”

Dabi stomped his cigarette out on the pavement, and left you dumb founded

“Cute?” you mumbled, your face felt a bit red, it was the first time you had been called cute by someone outside your family, it felt nice.

#yandere dabi #yandere dabi x reader #yandere mha #yandere my hero academia #yandere hawks #yandere keigo takami #yandere keigo takami x reader #yandere toya todoroki #yandere toy todoroki x reader #re write #yandere

[confessions-of-an-old-cassette]

the urge to re write the entirety of hazbin hotel is quite strong tonight folks

#asta discusses #hazbin hotel #fic writing #re write #writeblr

[thepastisapebbleinmyshoe]

Winter crept, into their home, with a subtle shift, autumn concedes, to his frigid touch, and broken vows.

His love dissolves, on the winter ground, where snow quietly falls. Breaking his controls, to take her power back, she planted her own flowers. delicately, smoldering in ash.

"She Planted Her Own Flowers" (Bookshop.org)

#poetry and art #artists on tumblr #writers inspiration #spring poetry #women authors #tumblr poetry #poets of tumblr #re write #women writers #authors of tumblr #writerscreed

[dophaminezest]

Ask my rewrite au

#character design #character re design #disney junior #pj masks #fan art #pj masks fanart #pjmasks #re write #rewrite #ask game #ask #fanfic

[adrianathetransbitch]

Act: Prelude:

You are a kid at the golden apple park named Jessica (OC) with her friend Lucy Yi, Lucy is automatically let in on sight, as for Jessica, the greater stopped her, the greater was one of the mascots named "bo bo the clown".

As weirdly well kept as he looked with his pure white teeth and his almost ringmaster like mustache, he had a sense dread that was instilled within Jessica as he looked her up and down.

He grinned and gestured to her to give him her ticket but Jessica, going to point at Lucy realised that she was already out of view.

Bo Bo showed her the ticket as he placed it in her hand but as she was one step away from the gate, the clown pulled her away from the line with a smile on his face as he pulled her through the Forrest the prelude ends as it cuts to her missing poster...

Blowing in the wind.

Act: 1: intro

Nicky is sitting in his tree house with his corkboard with some missing posters pinned to a map of the town with pictures of the presumed abductions that once took place, the places seem to surround one house, 910 friendly court.

Nicky then looks at his neighbors house as he spots what seems to be his best friend, (Aaron Peterson) who had been missing for a month, being chased by his father (the neighbor) through the house before looking out a window, looking Nicky dead in the eyes as the neighbor pulls him away from the window and towards the basement.

Nicky leaves his tree house and then ends up in the tutorial. Think of the tutorial basically being the same as the one I Hello neighbor alpha 2.

Ending:

Nicky hears crying for behind a door in the basement, as he opens the door to reveal that in truth, it was not only a recording but Aaron was only a way to get Nicky into his basement as the neighbor tosses Nicky to the ground as he holds him down and-

Act:2:

You play as Aaron as he tries to get Nicky out the basement.

Ending: I mean, we've all played HN to know what happens.

Act 3:

Tomorrow

#hello neighbor #hello neighbor 2 #hello guest #mr peterson #theodore peterson #nicky roth #aaronpeterson #re write

[maziiikowa]

Yandere Simulator Re-write: Osana

Ogawa Haru is a math teacher. She loves the subjects she teaches, and tries her best, to help her students with it. She also loves cats. If there is situation, where she can talk about them, she will. And no one will stop her. In her childhood, she came to France for few years. There, she met Loann and his little sister. Some years passed, and her relation with Loann didn't survive it. Now they are just coworkers. 

#re write #yandere simulator redesign #re design #yandere simulator rewrite #yandere simulator #crimson passion

[rubywolf0201]

The big things that I want to change in KNB Last Game is that instead of having an American basketball team who are generic racists not to mention being super entitled as well, I would instead bring back Haizaki where he organized a team just to get revenge on the GOM + Kagami which prompted the latter two to team up (also giving these 7 characters much more substance to bond over btw).

Oh and bring in more players and have them contribute to the game because it rubs me the wrong way that they’re reduced to being cheerleaders and I’m sure that they and their fans no less deserves better. (No srsly it’s like what Mura has said: why bring in subsitute players at all?)

#rubi’s post #kuroko no basket #kuroko's basketball #anti knb last game #meta #re write

[cru5h-cascades]

Maya and the Three but Maya lives :D

Made this because of the re-imagining I'm working on for the series (in the re-imagining Maya loses her arm during the final battle against Michlan instead of dying and becoming the big ball of gas known as the sun; she recieves a prosthetic arm from the Candle Maker as one of the rewards for bringing an end to the battle between mortals and gods) (I really wanted her to get the happy ending she deserved).

Used this as inspiration for Maya's prosthetic 'cause I thought it kinda matched Maya's gear pretty well also it kinda looked like something you'd recieve from a powerful entity like the Candle Maker from the Book of Life (these two pieces of media happen in the same universe for those unaware).

#maya and the three #my art #re write #i tried my best on the temple in the background #it's blurred out so details aren't that importaint?? #heart of a god

[paulythide]

Doing some spring cleaning.

Hello everyone. I just want to update you that I am going to take this day and the day of tomorrow to rest.

Tomorrow is my birthday! So, I want to take a small break! Not only from writing fanfics but also from my work.

Still, I am doing some small editing and re-writing on [The White Lion of the Red Keep] Fanfic. If you check the first 4 chapters, there's going to be small re-writing and editing. Hopefully, it would be better now. I want to clean up the oldest chapters in order to make it better. But it will take time.

Still, see you all soon!

#announcement #ao3 author #fanfiction #editing #birthday #re write

[that0newriter]

Chapter 1: The Book Opens

“Even miracles take a little time.” —Fairy Godmother (Cinderella)

Once upon a time, before the wishing star, was a kingdom way out in the seven seas. The kingdom of Rosas, beautiful and grand- ruled by King Magnifico, who studied sorcery to grant his subjects deepest desires. And his beautiful queen and the love of his life, Queen Amaya- who helped the King spread joy and positivity across the land. Disaster struck however, The Queen fell to illness, leaving Magnifico heartbroken and distraught as wizards, witches, mages and others failed to aid. Not only did darkness fall across the kingdom, but upon Magnifico's heart as well. The King banned wishes and dreams alike; keeping magic to himself, growing wicked and cold at his loss. Yet one soul flourished within Rosas's walls- a child born with determination and light named Asha, daughter of Tomás and Sakina who was destined to do something incredible.

"¡Abuelo! ¡Abuelo!" The little girl rushed up to her grandfather who was quick to let out a chortle as he leaned down from his chair, allowing his granddaughter to throw herself into his arms with a gleeful laugh- Sabino lifting Asha up into the air as a smile graced his wrinkling face. "Dios mío, Asha. Mira lo grande que te has puesto- look how big you've grown! What have you two been feeding her?" The old man turned to his son and his wife, who both snickered and shook their heads. "Oh, Sabino, she just has Tomás's good growth!" "¡Mi Amor! Last I checked, I am still shorter than my Brother." Laughter filled the room as Asha settled down onto her grandfather's lap, looking up at him with excitement.

"Abuelo, Did you hear what the king was going to do-!? He's about to collect more wishes! I hope he picks me!" The adult's faces showed pain for a moment, knowing their Asha was still so naive to realize how the King was. However, Sabino was quick to recover- putting on a smile and looking softly down at his granddaughter and began to speak. "Ah, Ah, No te precipites, querida nieta. Don't jump too far now!" He gently taps Asha's nose before scooping her up and walking over to a nearby window, his son and daughter-in-law joining by his side as they all look up to the night sky littered with twinkling lights and stars. Despite the darkened clouds that painted themselves against the deep hues of la luna's canvas, the moon and her star children shined brightly. The child's brown hues widened in awe before leaning her head against her grandfather's neck, enamored by the stars before jumping up- her eyes dancing around her skull as she witnessed a shooting star, even pointing with a big curious smile.

"What was that-!?" Tomás lets out a light laugh as his daughter is returned to his arms, hoisting her up onto the windowsill. "That, Mi hija, was a shooting star. Legend says that if you wish upon a shooting star, that your dreams could possibly come true." The brunette lets out a breathy woah in response, her dark hues finding themselves drawn back to the sky in anticipation only to find herself suddenly disappointed. "Isn't there going to be more...?" The kid turns her body back to her family as a frown tugs on her lips- her papá scratching the back of his neck with nervousness.

"Well..." "Asha," her mother began, "It was a miracle to see a shooting star such as this but...they only come every so often. And most of those times all the village is asleep. I know it must disappoint you, msichana mzuri, but it's...it is life. It's something you won't understand until you're a bit older." Sakina kneeled onto her knees as she took Asha's hands into her own, fiddling with the light purple sleeves of her gown. The fabric is rough, but not uncomfortable to wear upon her kin's sensitive skin- and soon a soft kiss was placed upon Asha's braids before the gorgeous dark skinned woman stands up, motioning to her daughter to get off the windowsill.

"But, don't let this be a disappointing experience! After all, there could be another one. ¡No pierdas la esperanza!" The man in golden clothes ushered his granddaughter up the stairs, Off to bed now he spoke in Spanish, a wink following behind before he turned to Asha's parents who were already in a hushed discussion. Asha stayed by the stairs before defeatedly going up to her room and plopping herself down face first in her cotton sheets with a frustrated groan. Her face then tilts itself up as a pout painted itself across her freckled face- a huff drawing from her nose before she looks over to her goat plush that her mother made her when she was a baby- a soft jingle from the small bell it dawned on its collar rang out gently with each movement, purple fabric soon meeting the wooden backboard of her bed as she looks up to her room's sky line. The stars were even more visible from here than down stairs, something Asha had noted ever since her father told her all the ancient tales of the stars, but of course some with a spin that her dear grampa added.

"Mm..." Asha closed one of her eyes, feeling them grow heaven even when she tried to rub the sleep away. "Usiku Mwewa, Valentino...Goodnight..." A yawn escaped the younglin's lips as she tried to settle down under the cover of her bed before a shooting light caught her attention. Asha was quick to shoot up- staring up at her ceiling before quickly stumbling to her balcony, pushing the doors open carefully before crawling onto the railing. Her face lit up at the sight of the array of shooting stars- hope filling her eyes as she watched the shower before all of them slowly faded from view...hugging Valentino close, she closed her eyes with a smile. "I'm going to make my dreams come true..." Her gaze falls to the stuffed animal in hand before she falls back to her bed, fully satisfied to find that maybe there was another way to get a wish granted than giving it to the king. Contently, Asha closed her eyes- ready to wake up to a new day.

"Asha...Ashaaaa~... ASHA!" The woman lets out a yelp as she jolts up from her pillows, trying to blink the tiredness out of her eyes as Dehlia slowly makes her way through the room- relying on her rose wood crutch to keep her up as she places a tray down onto Asha's littered desk, a plate of Shao Bing Jia Dan and a small cup of Dou Jiang sitting on top. The older woman lets out a small sigh as she fixes her glasses, looking down towards Asha who was already messing with her curly hair before pausing. "Thank you, Dehlia- I swear it keeps getting harder and harder to escape from my dreams. They're just so..." "Magical?" "Uh Huh-!" "Whimsical?" The ravenette raises a brow as she watches the now seventeen year old scarfing down her food and warm soy milk. "嚼(Jué), Asha, 嚼(Jué)! No need to scarf your food down-!" Dehlia placed a hand on her hip before continuing "I don't need you to choke. After all, you need to be up and well for your Birthday dinner!" at the mention of her birthday, Asha's eyes lit up, carefully sipping on her milk while setting the empty plate back down on the tray and sliding herself out of her dark purple bed. A notion that her care taker took as needing to leave the teen to get ready for the day- but not without calling from deeper within the house remember your bag.

Books dawned every wooden shelf within the lilac painted room, cursive writing in a deeper purple and some sloppy art covering one of the walls. It was... different from the home the brunette once lived in. She bent over, shoving some dirty clothes into her laundry bag before rushing to the closet and pulling at the wooden doors- rustling through an array of colored clothes. Elegant teals to bright yellows that contrasted with her skin perfectly, but none compared to Asha's favorite gown that she tugged from her every day clothes. A purple half sleeved gown that dawned a midnight purple stash around the waist, the main purple cuts off at the shoulders and mid thigh in favor of switching to a lilac color. Darker swirls dawned the edge of the dress as Asha carefully combs through her hair- staring into the mirror with an intense look, concentrating on scooping some hair cream onto her fingers and brushing it through until she was satisfied with her curls. With a hair tie, the dama gathered her brown hair into a low ponytail before urging some stray hairs away from her face. Asha gives herself a self-assured nod after a few more look overs before sliding on her sapatu and wrapping her Jua Kilemba around the back of her head prior to retrieving her laundry bag and heading out her bedroom door. But not before placing three fingers against a photo in a wooden frame, a picture of her familia, a feeble smile dawning her lips. "Nakupenda sana, mi familia." A soft snicker falls from the teen's mouth as her feet moved across the hard floor, almost knowing that her parents would've lightly chastised her for using Swahili and Spanish in the same sentence. "Today's going to be a good day..."

#🌸once upon a disney WISH🌸 #🌸WISH🌸 #disney's wish #disney wish #wish #re write #🌸my writing🌸

[pixelcolorworld]

Still character study but man I like this one

#my drawimg #digital drawing #drawing #art #digital artist #digital art #creepypasta #jeff the killer #re write

[jesusprincess16]

iEnyoyed the kiss (iCarly fanfiction)

En esta ocasión, les quiero compartir un fanfic que escribí. Es una especie de: ¿Qué pasaría sí...? del capítulo 'Creo que se besaron'. Lo escribí hace unos meses y sigue en desarrollo, espero que les guste.

Título: iEnyoyed the kiss.

Autor: Emira de Jesus (fanfiction.net) JesusPrincess16 (wattpad).

Estado: En progreso,

Resumen: Sam y Carly van al dentista y todo va según lo esperado, hasta que Carly tiene que dejar a Sam para cuidar a su hermano herido por los prisioneros. Freddie acepta ir a cuidar de Sam sin saber cuánto le afectaría hablar con una Sam fuera de sus sentidos. -Seddie.

Links: Fanfiction.net: https://www.fanfiction.net/s/14319046/1/iEnyoyed-the-kiss Wattpad: https://www.wattpad.com/story/360605153-ienyoyed-the-kiss-seddie Próximamente también estará disponible en Ao3.

#seddie #icarly #fanfics #fanfic #freddie benson #sam puckett #carlyshay #carly shay #tv series #nickelodeon #sampuckettxfreddiebenson #what if #ithinktheykissed #re write #wattpad #wattpad fanfiction #fanfiction #fanfiction.net #fanfic writing #work in progress #ao3 fanfic #ao3 #archive of our own #ao3 link #ao3 stuff #ao3 writer

[karmitofenix]

...I feel like an interesting choice of the episode "Unhappy Campers" would be to make Millie kill Barbie, because I feel like the guy was not really the target, but hiding the evidences of Barbie's actions.

So killing her before Blitzø going into the Camp, then hearing a pair of demons killing one of the Camp Counselors without a lot of evidence, would be a interesting thought of having to make Blitzø deal with the Weight of his Actions, and slowly realize he killed his sister, because he could care less.

The next episode would be about Blitzø actually having to deal with his flaws, and trying to blame everyone for his sister's death.

Instead of Stolas being fully recovered, I feel the contrast of him being still baddly hurt, but trying to better for the people on his life, beyond Blitzø who seems to have abandoned him, maybe considering to lower his status as Royalty...with setting up, for the proper solution to get rid of his deal with Blitzø, even considering to get out of his life.

Would do the thing Viv wants of him, make him sympathetic and a nice guy, flawed yes, but actually doing nice but ultimely funny things.

I.M.P. would get a bodyguard job thanks to Loona being the One to receive a call...with Ozzie, so there some bitter humor, because Ozzie actually feels somewhat bad and needs their help, but he had a reputation to keep.

They are in no danger, but Ozzie wants to keep Fizz safe, no mattering what.

Fizz and Blitzø would have a talk where they talk about the incident, and unlike canon, Fizz is the better person of the Two, so Blitzø would be a mess, not actually talk what bothering him, but taking the opportunity to apologize but getting angry for something overlooked...Fizz kinda forgot about Blitzø's mom, to the point of him not even knowing she was dead until Blitzø told him, which Sets Blitzø off, but the joke is he feels genuily bad about the permanently crippling Fizz, and respects Fizz not wanting anything with him, but HE don't wants to know about someone not even feeling half was bad about the death of someone who cared for Fizz was her own child, to make things worse, Fizz kinda mispronounced her name, due to feeling extremely unconfortable.

...Like I keep the intentions of the series on, Let some Room for Character Development, fixed the Stolas Dissonance Issue, of him coming across as a uwu softboy, by making him have consequences.

...I thought of this for a while, but It was not particularly hard to make the ideas, to risk making your characters Unlikable, to make more compelling stories, even for a comedy is a great thing.

...I did this, more to showcase a non-spoken issue, it feels like "It's hell, deal with it.", feels like a shield to remove a certain degree of poor writting on the series, which is talked about in counter argument aspect, becaue they never really risk making the characters assholes, and when they do, the series tries to fix that.

Because outside of the setting...The Series feels...safe, not really thought provoking, because It feels like the most interesting aspect of the series is talk about what normally would be plot holes, but the universe was made with aditional content to justify these plot holes.

A lot of extra content is to justify what would be without them: plot holes, because a lot the extra content is to fill holes,...like rewarding people for catching plot holes, by giving the fill to these holes...but never actually decreasing the amount of holes, always selling the product with holes, and selling the hole filler to those who noted the problem.

Except the hole filller these days don't solve the problem and people don't want buy a Hole Filler, every single time they find a new hole, they just want something without holes.

#helluva critical #re write

[bigbearbruno]

My re-design of Titanus Margygr from the monsterverse, i'm going to do a bunch of re-designs for the kaiju in the monsterverse and a re-write/au of the series

#fyp #digital drawing #begginerartist #xyzbca #cartoon #art #furry artist #godzilla x kong the new empire #godzilla comics #godzilla vs kong #godzilla 2014 #legendary godzilla #monsterverse #titanus gojira #godzilla king of the monsters #sirencore #kaiju #kaiju oc #daikaiju #re design #re write #tumblr oc #tumblr dashboard #artist on tumblr #mv #adam wingard

[aloneatpeace]

Should I kill off Damon because what he did to Caroline maybe i could not kill him but he won't be love interest at all maybe Stefan too .i don't think anyone would date your friends abuser and Stefan know what is happening to Caroline and doesn't stop Damon so I'm really think about cutting them off . Caroline and bonnie as couple maybe ! what do you think ?

#the vampire diaries #bonnie bennet #caroline forbes #bonnie justice #bonnie deserve better #Caroline deserve better #damon salvatore #stefan salvatore #Elijah mikealson #kol mikealson #klaus mikealson #vampire diaries x reader #re write #elena gilbert #teen wolf x tvd #cosmic chaos #aloneatpeacefic

[maziiikowa]

Yandere Simulator Re-write: Midori

More of my YS re-write!

This time - Midori. I changed her name to Gima Midori, and now she is friend of Aimi. She is one of few sources of information, but she's not the best one. She is friendly, optimistic and bubbly.

And one more thing. From now on I will call this "series" Crimson Passion! Tags will be the same, but yeah :DD

#art #digital #yandere simulator #yandere simulator redesign #yandere simulator rewrite #re design #re write #crimson passion