It is done! I feel both like I spent far too much time on this update yet not nearly enough. Some poses are a bit stiff but hopefully the battle itself still reads. I know not much progress was made plot wise, but trust me, there’s a few things in here that are going to become very important much later on in the story.
Leo’s Ninpo: The keen reader might recognize that a number of Leo’s attacks are ones he picked up from Gram Gram, but with a bit of that added portal flair. I really wanted to push the boundaries of where he takes his skills, but stay true to the belief that rather than becoming a heavy hitting powerhouse like his brothers, his strength lies in his ability to calculate and react on the fly. I also wanted to give some level of limitation to each of their gifts. For Leo, it’s less the number of portals he creates that exhaust him, but rather the size and amount of energy that passes through these portals and his ability to keep them stable during the transaction. He has also become much better at keeping his portals well protected (so that portal pirates can not interfere or rather, so that the pirates aren’t killed by stray laser beams rushing through). As far as the Portal Choppers, we’ll be coming back to those and how they work later on in the story…
As always, thank you for your patience, hopefully the next one won’t take as long to create haha.
do i have… Opinions abt the pjo show?? maybe. in private amongst close confidants, i might. but publicly?? as a fan who wants all 5 seasons?? incredible. five shiny stars! the best show i’ve ever fucking seen im showing it 2 everyone i know
Foolish: So you wanna- so you wanna go on a date, you wanna marry my son, ok? Or- we'll just start with a date, we won't even get to the married part yet. What are your intentions with my son?
Cellbit: To take care of him, to protect him, to make him feel loved and happy and-
Foolish: Ok, good answer, good answer. Now listen, I'm kinda a fun dad, you know what I mean? So I'm not gonna say, "Bring him home by 11!" or whatever, you guys do what you want, you're old enough, ok? But if you break his heart Cellbit, ok? I swear, I swear I'll put you down, ok?
Cellbit: Uhm.
Foolish: Alright, now you guys have fun, ok! Go have a date!