#constructive criticism appreciated!!

[we-all-horny-here]

Went through the character tags for some doodle inspirations part 1 Original posts under the cut

[Check my pinned to see how you can support me <3.]

#sanders sides #sanders sides fanart #roman sanders #logan sanders #remus sanders #logince #intrulogical #artster #ts art #ts roman #ts remus #ts logan #ts logince #ts intrulogical #also. trying to start adding alt text to my art. so #constructive criticism and advice greatly appreciated <3

[darkcademiasss]

Sentimental- @wolfstarmicrofic word count: 237 february 23

Remus knew sirius like the back of his hand, sometimes he wondered if he knew sirius more than he knew himself.

Therefore he knew when sirius looked at the rose in his hand and looked up at remus, he knew sirius was going to get sentimental .

Sirius crushed him, putting his arms around remus and hiding his face in Remus' neck. Remus could feel his breath hitch when he felt sirius nuzzle his nose on the crook of his neck.

"Sirius'' he lightly whispered trying to fight the blush that was rising on his cheek

"Padfoot come on" he repeated when there was no reply.

Sirius finally released him, remus immediately wanted to pull him in again and never let him go but he settled on fisting his hands.

" you got me flowers" sirius muttered.

Remus could see he was on the verge of crying and started to panic did he do something wrong? Does sirius not like flowers?

"I- I uh i'm sorry if you dont like them, I can take them back. I just thought you'd like it" he stuttered nervously, one hand scratching the back of his neck.

"No no dont you dare these are mine, I'll keep them forever" he declared blushing then looked nervous before adding " it's just that ive never gotten flowers before"

Remus promised himself there and then that he is going to give Sirius black flowers for the rest of his life

#this was my first time writing in public #AND writing a short story #I tried ok #please be kind #constructive criticism is encouraged amd appreciated #hope you like it #wolfstar microfic #Wolfstar #wolfstar fanfiction #remus x sirius #remus lupin #sirius black #james potter #marauders era #harry potter #dead gay wizards

[asexual-cat-furry]

TF2 nationality headcanons

(I think of RED and BLU as separate characters, who might just happen to look/act alike)

RED Scout - american (Boston, MA) (his ma has irish ancestry, from Galway - I saw this headcanon somewhere and I love it)

BLU Scout - filipino-american (NYC)

RED Soldier - american obv (Atkins, AR) (I know that he's supposed to be from the midwest but I don't care. I headcanon that his dad is from Idaho and his mom is from Ohio. Also I think he's like 25% native or something because I think it'd be funny/interesting if he's not 100% White American™)

BLU Soldier - american obv (somewhere in Virginia) (he was raised by eagles in the Appalachian wilderness, so he barely speaks coherent english)

RED Pyro - chinese (somewhere in the south, but spent most of their childhood homeless in Shanghai) (they never told anyone and it's unlikely they ever will. The only people who know are Pauling and the Spies, but none of them will tell) (I know it's a popular headcanon but I never really saw them as mexican, sorry)

BLU Pyro - irish (Dublin) (their muffled voice is made harder to decipher due to their hardcore irish accent. BLU Demo can understand it best)

RED Demoman - scottish (Ullapool) (literally canon)

BLU Demoman - scottish (Glasgow)

RED Heavy - russian (somewhere in far eastern Siberia) (his family doesn't look white, especially Zhanna, so I think they're probably some kind of siberian people)

BLU Heavy - ??? (swedish? belarusian? idk man)

RED Engie - american (Bee Cave, TX) (I hc the Conaghers as a whole to be a mix of white & latino, so the Engies speak spanish as a second language and often just switch to it to exchange praise/insults/advice without others noticing)

BLU Engie - american (Bee Cave, TX) (RED Engie's cousin although doesn't have the Conagher surname actually)

RED Medic - german obv (Stuttgart) (jewish, although his family probably converted to christianity many years ago and either way they're not particularly religious, Medic is actually the "most religious" of his immediate family but that's just because he knows Satan exists)

BLU Medic - british-greek

RED Sniper - new zealander, half-māori (born in Auckland, raised near-ish to Perth)

BLU Sniper - australian, half-aboriginal (somewhere in the outback in Queensland) (the half-aboriginal thing is also a headcanon I saw somewhere and happily adopted)

RED Spy & BLU Spy - french (Paris) (they're twins)

Edit: Dang it I forgot the tags

#constructive criticism very appreciated! #also if I said something offensive I am terribly sorry #if I did pls tell me so I can fix it #tf2 #tf2 red team #tf2 blu team #tf2 scout #tf2 soldier #tf2 pyro #tf2 demoman #tf2 heavy #tf2 engineer #tf2 medic #tf2 sniper #tf2 spy #also both pyros go by any pronouns! #tf2 headcanons

[agent-toast]

is it too early for an art redraw?

original:

a lot of text below \/

so things have changed since i first got into the ieytd fandom in late september/early october, my phoenix went from he/she/they (which was what i meant by 'any' pronouns cause at that time i wasn't aware of neopronouns sorry :>) to he/they with sometimes she/her. this has nothing to do with the '>:(( fem phoenix is bad' thing, all phoenixes are equally awesome.

i think i mostly used she/her as one of phoenix' pronouns because i'm afab and it'd feel easier rping them that way. but idk now i feel like my phoenix is more bigender/multigender using he/they? it's just what i'm comfortable with now. and it fits with the way i draw them androgynous but also fem but ALSO masc haeha

why am i gender questioning my favourite fictional characters now sjskd

anyway art stuff in the past i used more of a red-orange colour but now it's reddish maroon because that's cool >:)

and maybe it's just me but i think the proportions are slightly better? idk leave ur thoughts in the tags/comments

also i switched the sandwich and the lighter hehe

#constructive criticism is very much appreciated #ieytd #my ieytd art #ieytd ideas #agent phoenix ieytd #agent phoenix #my art <3 #i expect you to die

[skitty-kirby]

Still pretty burnt out from Art Fight, but I've been checking out different tutorials on how to improve my art in the meanwhile and stumbled upon some digital painting/rendering videos- and seeing as how the two in particular I watched during this were only 6 minutes each I actually had the attention span to follow along and absorb the tips LMAO. //I don't really know how to paint/render, I normally do cell-shading and even that's a tad limited hhh. I should probably focus on the basics after this because whew this is rough. But it was very fun overall, I'd love to try this technique out again sometime! If anyone's interested in the tutorials I followed, both videos are here and here on YouTube by nastume__san.

#kirby #kirby right back at ya #kirby of the stars #hoshi no kaabii #meta knight #kirby anime #blade knight #sword knight #They're my comfort characters your honor #Finally learned how to draw Blade's armor LMAO #if anyone has any tips or tutorials they think would be helpful I'd be more than appreciative #constructive criticism as well <3

[1i2love-7myself]

top jaehyun x bttm male reader !!

the reader is also in nct 127 and they are born in the same year but the reader is younger than him and all that fans know is that they are always together like where the other is the other one is not far away type

Stay

Jaehyun and you were unable to cease yourselves from landing a touch onto each other's skin, speaking to each other or just having notions about each other.

But today was unusual. Jaehyun would usually stare at you for approximately 10 seconds then remove his eyes from you but... all he did was stare throughout the entire live.

Why? We all have knowledge of why... he was probably extremely horny and was in need to be inside of your warm heat.

That was happening at the moment.

Laying flat on your stomach, jaehyun's cock so deep inside the younger that you were unable to help that you were imagining the little things that were out at night also known as stars.

Moans after moans after groans after whimpers went straight to Jaehyun's cock that was rearranging your guts by each second. And to make things worse (better), he was super huge so after every thrust, your body would vibrate.

Focusing on every small detail, you eyeballed the action of him panting extremely hard as the bed would slam against the thin wall.

Drowsiness over powered you by an inch and by the second, your consciousness was beginning to fall in and out of slumber. You were in hopes to stay awake but, slumber kicked in quicker. Now at the moment you were out of it.

Jaehyun immediately noticed your lack in sexual mouth noises so to wake you up from your not so peaceful slumber.. his hips made a hard thrust inside of you, waking you up whimpering.

"Don't fall asleep on me, love... stay." Jaehyun whispered into your red tip ear. Who would say no to that?

#nct #127 #nct 127 #mwah #jaehyun x male reader #jaehyun #x #male #reader #i tried my hest to make this nice and simple so... #i appreciate constructive criticism!! #please tell me if i have done something wrong

[birthfan]

Your 3 weeks over due with twins. Your absolutely massive with babies you can’t hardly walk but when you do you have the best/ biggest waddle ever. You work for the best real-estate companies around and your the #1 Realtor at the company. On a Saturday you get a phone call from your boss begging you to work an open house because the others can get it sold even though your on leave already. You agree but are very disgruntled but you slip into a loose sundress (only thing that fits) put on your heals and go to the house open it up and start letting customers in. ****As expected the open house brings dozens and dozens of shoppers *****

"hmmm of course everyone would hnnng decide to come today" I mumbled to myself as the potential buyers kept coming in, it was to be expected on a Saturday. "mmmnn it's almost like she wants me to pop out hnnng this baby in front of them" I thought to myself; my boss had called me up that morning offering triple my month's salary for working on this open house, apparently no one else was available but the overdue woman who was going to be induced the next day, whatever, I needed the money for the hospital expenses.

"excuse me miss, about the second floor.." a customer approached making me put on my customer service smile as I held my contracting belly, I'd been having contractions all day and they were starting to get closer and stronger, but I tried my best to keep a straight face, if it all went well I could just drive to the hospital once everyone left.

"well it's better if I show you" I said leading the customer towards the stairs, every step made me want to push, the baby felt so low and heavy and the pressure was unbearable; we finally reached the top of the stairs.

"huuu as you can hmmm see th-the s-second floor ba-haa-bathroom is..." I tried my best to best to describe the house as the contractions were now on top of each other making me pant and wince as I talked.

"Ma'am I'm sorry are you alright?" The customer asked worriedly "ooh d-don't you worry about me, I'm fi-" I was unfortunately interrupted by a loud splash as fluids gushed of my womanhood soaking the carpet beneath my feet.

I squatted deeply as I could feel the baby's head passing through my cervix causing me to push "hnnnnnng haaaa" the customer freaked out and yelled "OH MY GOD!" Catching the attention of everyone in the house.

My face turned a deep red as I turned towards the stairs to see that almost everyone had flocked at their base where they could see my soaked panties under the skirt of my sundress.

I pushed again feeling my lips bulge under the now almost see-through panties "hmmggaaah" I groaned as I slowly stood back up and asked the customer that I had accompanied "huuu c-could you lower m-my underwear haaa?"

They blushed deeply as they lowered themselves in front of me, went under my dress and lowered my drenched panties down to my ankles "th-thank you" I pant out before I hear someone say "Call an ambulance!!!".

Another customer went up the stairs "I think it's best if we get you down miss" he said as he reached me and the other customer "Y-yeah th-that seems like a good idea" I wrapped my arms around both of their shoulders as they helped me down.

Every step was torture as the movement of my legs caused the baby's head to slowly open me up, by the time we reached the bottom of the stairs another contraction hit me "mmmmmmnnnnnggggggghh" I grunted as the baby almost crowns.

"quick get her to the couch!" a customer yelled as my two helpers lead me to the expository couch. As I sat one of the customers opened my legs up and made me put my feet on the coffe table.

"She almost to a full crown I don't think the ambulance will make it in time" she said with a soothing calmness in her voice "alright hun listen to me, the next push is going to hurt like hell, but I need you to keep going until you can, okay?" She said.

I nodded as I tried not to think at all the people watching me in this sorry state. I felt a powerful contraction and began pushing "hnnnnnnnn" "alright good keep going" "nnnnnhhhhhaaaaaaa" "the head is at a full crown, keep pushing" "aaaahhhmmmmmmnnnnggg" I moaned as my pussy felt like it would split apart in front of everyone as I pushed.

"gggggggAAAAAH" "alright nice job miss,the head is halfway out, with the next push it should come out no problem" the woman said smiling softly at me as she lead my hand towards the top of my baby's head to feel it.

As my fingers felt my baby's hair and wet head I could feel myself begginning to cry from joy "oh my god that's my baby" I said tears streaming down my face.

The woman smiled "yes it is and in a minute you'll finally be able to hold them in your arms" she said, her fingers helping my lips stretch, as my body prepared fr another contraction.

As soon as it hit I pushed "hmmmmggaah" I grunted as the head popped out spraying fluids on the couch "amazing hun, let me just check for a cord" she said, all the other customers looking amazed at the head dangling in-between my legs.

"hmmm quick I gotta push" I whimper as the woman checks my baby's neck "alright you're good to know, push to your heart's content" as soon as I heard those words I pushed as hard I could, feeling the shoulders stretch my vagina again as they slowly came out, with my baby sliding out of me into the woman's hands.

"haaa haaa haaa" I panted, my body exhausted from having to birth my child. The woman handed my crying baby to me "it's a boy, how do you want to call him?" She asked as I began nursing my baby as the remaining fluids still leaked out of my sore womanhood.

I look at the woman and ask "what's your name?" She looks puzzled "huh Jessica" she answers, I smile to her and answer "then I'll call him Jesse"

#birth kink #giving birth #birth #fpreg #i wish that were me #lovely anon #public birth #sorry if this is a little rough #got hit with sudden inspiration and wrote it in one sitting lol #any constructive criticism is appreciated

[liesmultixxx]

Hi🫶🏻 this is peak stream of consciousness writing so beware: cringe ahead (nonetheless I’d be happy if someone read this lol it would mean a lot)

——-

The sky is blue

The grass is green

Still my mind is playing tricks on me

if what I feel and what I see would be less real

Then maybe I’d have a lot less ghosts

roaming around and fighting me

i am so tired, do you know

it takes everything in me to be this strong

I cannot stay, but I cannot go

who the fuck wants to die alone?

I guess I do, It’s all I know

an eternal curse put on to me

thanks to my lovely family

I do love them, I cannot lie

it’s just this feeling i’ve got inside

would someone love me for

who I am, this wretched mess

who am I kidding- of course they won’t

This life is all just for show

wish someone had told me this once before

just let go of your fears and ghosts

they’ll come back sooner or later anyway

no point in driving yourself crazy

wish I could believe this sage

I still choose to put the blame

all on me

it’s kinda sad

i don’t why

i won’t be loved, I won’t be liked

what can I do?

maybe I should just stop

#my poem #original poem #poetry #my own thoughts #my writing #my words #mental health issues #mental health awareness #i swear I’ve written better stuff before #but i just felt like posting this #but who am i kidding I’ll probably delete it later anyway #lol #liesmultixxx talks 🩵 #this is me hi #my thoughts #maybe someone can relate #kind words are appreciated! #and constructive criticism of course #I’m no writer i just like to express myself in odd poems apparently #feeling insecure

[effervescentmelody]

Day #11

Repost of day 11 of my art challenge. It was brought to my attention that in my original posting I used a skin tone for Kenji that was inappropriate and played into harmful stereotypes. This was not my intention. I apologize and will be conscious of these decisions moving forward.

#camp cretaceous #jwcc #kenji kon #yasmina fadoula #sammy gutierrez #the sibling dynamic between these twoooooo!! #constructive criticism is always welcome and appreciated

[mynonah]

#kurt hummel #born this way #glee #glee art #myno's stuff #any feedback is very much appreciated #not just the positive ones #i abslutely like constructive criticism #helps to become better

[neophallusnami]

#one piece #op #opfanart #zoro #sanji #usopp #Well. This could've been done better But I don't really feel like editing it. learning and growing and will do better next time. #would appreciate constructive comic criticism. #esp on the last 3 'panels' #n also the analysis itself could use work But 'tis a joke about how i Missed Something so. whatever

[pianokantzart]

So.... ummm of those of you who have read it... What did you think of the first few chapters of the story?

#It's a little slow I know but aaah I hunger for feedback #constructive criticism is appreciated #especially on my original stuff

[tozapeloda77]

So in my last post about this map I said that I would leave all of the metropolises unnamed for the time being because I argued that it was unlikely that any names on Earth would be reflective of our current era's culture and languages. Everything having changed so much by the Fall, an entire 5000 years were available for linguistic development, providing us with a linguistic evolution and diversity in scope similar to the difference between today and 3000 BCE earth.

At the risk of alienating people, I decided to come up with a very specific kind of naming scheme for Cradle regardless. I've listed all of the names that Union recognises as official, although it's important to mention that locals often have dozens of names for the same places, with usage fluctuating over the years. That's just how names change. However, what we see in real life as well is that the more significant and/or codified a placename is, the less it changes. It used to be that a town's name was at least spelled differently every century or so, but ever since governments began drawing up maps and writing everything down in registries, this sort of top-down reinforcement of the linguistic norm has slowed the process of names changing enormously. Similarly, names on Cradle capture the imagination of billions of tourists, as well as the biggest bureaucratic institution in the history of humanity, meaning that the locals remapping and reconstructing their own named spaces have to go up against significantly more weight than people did in the past.

Theory aside, names are divided in broadly four categories. We've got the "canonical" names, the "spaceports should sound cool" names, the "universal values" names, and finally, the bulk of the names are proto-language names. Union built these metropolises as planned cities, demarcating the rest of the planet for the natural world and the indigenous people who would live without destroying it, and as such, they picked the name. An important concession I made is that none of these names "evolved". Just like a planned suburb gets a name that reflects the values and the interests of the developers, all of these names reflect Union (or rather FirstComm) and their ideology.

For the first category we have Dharamsala, which exists in the Lancer canon (mostly? The Field Guide to Harrison Armory isn't strictly canon, but what can you do), as well as Ponente, the seat of the local government of Cradle, and Custodio, named in honour of the names of founders of Union mentioned in This One That One. We don't actually know how significant they are, but their names honour the founding of Union and a new start.

The second category consists of the spaceports and a few other "cool" names. Spaceports are the blue dots around the equator, official points of entry from space. (Cradle's terrestrial blink gate Huascarán is located in Heelam). These names are stylised references to old Earth, with the exception of Jìya ya Nyènde which is my proto-Bantu approximation of "path to the stars". Permit me the romanticism. Other names laden with romanticism are Last Vault, World's End, and Flower. The three Massif Vaults were found in different locations; Switzerland being an archetype of this sort of things, I thought it apt if Europe/Switzerland got the last (and likely least significant) of these vaults. World's End is my homage to the tendency of humans to name places World's End. It happens a lot. On the cusp of the Sahara and close to the Atlantic Ocean, which is by far the most quiet part of Cradle, it truly is the world's end, if such a thing exists in the space age.

The "universal value" names are rendered in English because so is the rest of the map. In the Lancer universe, these names would be in the Union Common language. Peace, Diversity, Freedom, and Labour are examples of this.

Finally, in the fourth category I constructed names based on the oldest (proto-)languages I could find for each region, reasoning that Union would have seen these names as universalising. Rather than dividing, every human alive Cradle during the naming process would share in the heritage of each of these names. That said, all of the names are similar to the universal value names, reflecting positive connotations only, such as "warm hearth" or "place of welcoming". I do have to put a disclaimer that I'm no expert on reconstructed languages and the research was relatively basic, so if you're an expert on proto-Bantu or proto-Indo European, these names probably look stupid to you. However, for me they were necessary in creating a system of names that is both universal, representative of Earth's current diversity (and as decolonial as I could manage), which meant I could not use English as a universal language. Since I do play Lancer in English, I solved the dilemma in this way.

#lancer rpg #lancer ttrpg #worldbuilding #cartography #mapmaking #flower being the exception here ok #it is hard to find open access to proto-indigenous language resources #and then you have to assign a certain linguistic family to a certain location in north america? let's avoid imposing constraints of place #so I guess I said “let something new bloom” and came up with something innocent like flower #constructive criticism appreciated

[meloncalic]

Hey uh, if you can is it okay as a request for the blorbos thing (if I ain't late), if you do my boy Eric Dereckson? I haven't seen much of him around lately and I wanna just yk... See him in the ✨spotlight✨

i completely agree, anon!! there needs to be more of this lil sweetheart <33

also hope ya like it!! also yes "blorbo requests" kinda stopped themselves and i sorta soft "closed" them but you just asked so nicely anon i couldn't not <33

but regular requests are still open!! (i already have a couple of egos ive never really posted/drawn!! so that outta be fun) 

they just might be single doodles instead of the few sketches that i included with the blorbo round (if that makes sense??)

#markiplier #eric derekson #'in the spotlight' can jsut imagine this poor dude breaking down from stage fright /lh #poor bab #i would like to smooch and/or hug him if he would let me #this is my first time drawing prosthetics if anyone wants to give me constructive criticism id really appreciate it!!! #caldoodles

[frnkiebby]

Okay FellowWhores!

Here are your Appreciation Day details:

Over the next week I will post four of my favorite frimages with a little drabble of how I image the evens of the picture taking place.

They’ll be anywhere between 500-1k words.

With the first one being at 6pm today, i’m hoping it’ll follow an every other day schedule. So today (sunday) being the first, then tuesday at 6pm being the next, and so on until all four have been posted.

Ever your faithful FrankWhore,

frnkiebby~🎃

ps. ILY ALL THANKS FOR BEING WHORES FOR FRANK IERO WITH ME

#limit myself to 1k?? #i can hear a key three people cackling in the distance calling me a big fat liar #whatever #i’m gonna try #this’ll be fun #and i hope you guys like what i write #obvs you’re entitled to your opinion. #but if you have any criticism keep it constructive. my motto is ‘arson is the answer’ for a reason #ILY #frnkiebby’s FellowWhore Appreciation Day(week) #follower milestone #frnkiebby #frank iero #mcr #frnkiero #mcrmy #mcr5 #frnkie #my chemical romance #my chem #ilhsm

[bitchboi-gogurt]

"It was stupid of me to lose my shit like that, especially now that I know that Chase is in the car, home from spring break" (Carl's voice is a placeholder for now) critics very much appreciated and encouraged! mild spoilers for Echo VN below as well as my thoughts

To be honest, I'm not too confident I properly brought out the 'vibes' of the short story Trip with this one, even if it is only just the beginning of the song.

I might have made this piece eerie, but the story is more of Carl getting deeply fucked mentally with the drug he took, and his senses being completely disoriented. Not to mention his encounter with tulpa chunter (chulpa?) and socket face, as well as the dread, panic, and fear he feels throughout the experience.

I wanted to make the instrumental more 'psychedelic' than what I usually make to reflect that.

To do that, I tried to use a tremolo effect to make the music go from one ear to the other in a set rhythm to get that disoriented feel, but I'm not sure if that's enough... Well, that's all I have to say for now, hope this was at the very least enjoyable to listen to!

#echo vn #echo project #original music #critiques are welcome #constructive criticism welcome #critiques appreciated! #encouraged even! #furry #music #music wip #chulpa? #not chase hunter #not the chunter #carl hendricks